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Hima

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Re: ~ One_Love ~
« Reply #45 on: October 23, 2016, 12:11:41 AM »
Story suprb..possesive ilanu snanae..ipd next epi layae possesive katitan..anyway..pakka

sanviya

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Re: ~ One_Love ~
« Reply #46 on: November 08, 2016, 09:22:54 AM »
hiii mys story epo varum

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Re: ~ One_Love ~
« Reply #47 on: November 19, 2016, 03:15:04 PM »
Hi Sakthi , Vipurthi , Sanviya & Hima

Hru all  :) :)

Pazha ethir paarpu oda irkiringa pola  :) :)

Writer epdi kondu poraru nu parpom storya  :) :)

Plus writer sorry sonaru ivlo naal story update pana mudila coz of busyaam

Inimel at least weekly try panuraram update pana fenz  :) :)

Story innum konja nerathila vanturom  frenz  ;) ;)

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Re: ~ One_Love ~
« Reply #48 on: November 19, 2016, 07:33:02 PM »
Love_11 & 12



#Aditi_Narration

Next day morning epovum pola walking kilambunen.. Lite ah mist yum konjam sun light um kalandha mari irundhuchi.. elaila irundhu pani sotti kitu irundhuchi.. pani oda eeradhula birds la siraga silurdhutu maradhula utgarndhu isai isaigura mari romba pleasant ah irundhuchi.. Anga na daily parkuravangala pardhen.. oru rendu moonu aunties mrng ye avunga avunga husband pathi korai solite walk panidu irundhanga.. thathakkal news paper read pani avunga frnds koda edho indha vayasuku melayum young ah natta epdi thirudhalam nu pesidu irundhanga.. idhuku idaila slim maintain pandra girls.. andha girls ah crct pana epovum jagging vara boys.. andha pasangala jollu vidra girls elam thavarama vandhu irundhanga.. idhulam pardhutu walking panidu irundhen..

Hey aditi.. (andha voice keta mari irundhala thirumbunen.. Rithik)
Me-hey hi.. ne enga inga..

Rithik- yen vara kodatha.. (avan confused ah ena pardhan.. avanum tshirt track la vandhu irundhan..)
Me-illa.. na inga una pardhadu ilaye nu keten..

Rithik-but na una pardhu iruken.. daily sharp ah 6 clk ku walking pani mudichidu yoga panuvala..
Me-ama unaku epdi theriyum.. (namala nalla kavanichi irukan.. oru vela follow pandrano..)

Rithik-na indha park ku two yrs ah vandhutu iruken.. ne ena pardhu iruka mudiyadhu.. cuz na en thatha koda ulla shuttle velandukitu irupen.. sometimes edharchaiya una pardhu iruken.. but ipo dhan frnds la.. adhan thathakita sollidu oru attendance podalam nu vandhen.. una follow pandrenu thappa ninaichikadha.. pls.. sorry unoda walking ah disturb panadhuku..
Me-shhhh  :P sorry sorry  :P

Rithik- ohhh apo apdi dhan ninaichiya.. (avankita ena ans soldradhu nu theriyama ninnutu irundhen..)hey come on aditi.. chumma keten.. two days ku munadi pardhom.. yday pesunom.. ipo vandhu pesuna apdi dhan ninaika thonum.. im take it easy person.. just pardhen.. hi sollalam nu vandhen.. u carry on.. nama clg la mudinja parkalam..
Me-hmm ok.. :) (avan bye solidu anga irundhu poitan.. na walk panum bodhu dhan pardhen.. avan park ku ulla avunga thatha koda shuttle velandukitu irundhan. Nanum adha pardhu iruken but adha perusa eduthukitadhu illa..)

Again walk pani mudichidu yoga panidu kilambunen.. apo dhan rithik um avan thatha um pesidu enaku opp la vandhutu irundhanga..

Rithik-hey kilambiyacha,..
Me-yeah time achi la..class ku..

Rithik-ohh ok.. granny sonnen la enoda frnd oruthi pardhutu vandhenu.. iva dhan.. name aditi.. tamil dhan..
Thatha-dei ava tamil nu pesurdha vache theriyadha.. ivan ipdi dhan ma.. neyum ivan koda dhan padikuriya ma.. (avaru pechi uruvam la parka iyer mari irundhuchi..)

Rithik-illa granny same clg.. dance class la meet panunom..
Thatha-na ava kita keten da madaiya..

Rithik-eee..
Me-rithik sonadhu crct dhan..

Thatha-neyum ena rithik mari granny ye sollalam aditi.. be cool..
Me-hmm ok granny :)

Rithik-en granny konjam young old man.. adhan aditi..
Thatha-yaru da old man.. (rithik avunga thatha va kindl pana avaru avana kindl panidu irundhan.. na watch parka time ayidu irundhuchi..)

Me-rithik, granny.. clg ku time achi.. late ah pona warden thittuvanga..
Rithik-ohh shit.. I forgot it.. sorry aditi.. ne kilambu..

Me- hmm bye granny.. :) bye.. (rendu perukum bye sollidu escape ana podhum nu odi vandhen.. hstl vandha andha warden vera kathidu irundhanga.. first time nala excuse kuduthanga.. room ku pona apo dhan na room ku varadha therinjidu en room mate bathroom kulla venum nu ulla poidu ullairundhu ava dress towel ketu torture panuna..sari nu ava varadhukulla en books things la arrange pani vachidu.. mobl la eduthu vishal ku text panunen..

good morning :) nu anupitu mobl la kila vaikuradhuku munadiye.. good morning baby ;) (wink smile oda sleepy symbol um potu vandhuchi.. avan inum thungidu irukanu thonuchi.. sari avana disturb panalam nu call panunen..

Vishal-hi baby enna mrng ye call pani shock kudukura..
Me-chumma disturb panalame nu..

Vishal-so sad baby..
Me- yen..

Vishal-cuz na ipo una disturb pana porene..

(Adhukulla room mate kulichidu vandhuta.. aiyo ipo pogalana time ayidume..)

Me-Sari sari nee ena clg la vandhu disturb panalam.. ipo vaikuren..
Vishal-no way.. ipo ne ena disturb panalam nu dhane call panuna aprm enga di odra..

Me-misha(room mate)ready ayidu vandhuta.. na fresh aga poganum vishal..
Vishal-adiye ipdi call pani elupi vitu2 s agalam la nu parthiya.. enkita adhu nadakadhu.. na bed vitu enthirikura varai nee nagara mudiyadhu baby ma..

Me-aiyoo theriyama unku call pani matikiten.. :( pls.. time achi da.. sorry sorry..
Vishal-sari vai..

Me-choo chweet darling.. vaikuren..
Vishal-vai vai.. na en darling koda romance pana poren..

Me-yaru andha darling…  ::)
Vishal-ava oru azhagu devathai..  ???

Me- :) yaru.. (epdi um ena dhan solluvan..)
Vishal-yarooo.. adhu unaku edhuku..

Me-enna pathi sonna.. na dhan kepen..
Vishal-edhu… una pathi ah.. hello madam.. na rihanna ah sonnen.. enna ponnu da ava..

Me-I hate u..  >:(
Vishal- hehehe thank u baby..  :-* (kiss kuduthan..)

Me-Idiot..
Vishal- haha.. sari vaikurenu soniye vaikalaya inum.. time achi de.. rihanna wait panuva…

Me-hmm avalaye kattiko..
Vishal-kattikita koda nalla dhan irukum.. haaaa yenga vitrallee..

Me-romba vazhiyadhaa.. arasana nambi purshan ah vituradha..
Vishal-sari da pursha.. na una nambi varen ena kan kalangama pardhukuriya..

Me- una kan kalangamala.. 24*7shift potu una kankanikuradhu dhan en vela di pondati..
Vishal-happppada… apo neye velaiku poi ena kapathiduva.. inime na padika thevai illa ena pursha na soldradhu.. apo na thunguren.. don’t disturb me darling hubby..  :P time achi ne kilambu..

Me-(apo dhan time ah pardhen.. 8.15 achi..)shitt.. idiot.. time achi da..
Vishal-odu odu pursha..  :P good night..

Me-adi vanguva kilambu olunga..
Vishal-ok ok.. 10mins thungidu kilamburen.. bye bye baby.. (avan ph cut panitan..)

Me-idiot.. epdi cut panudhu paru.. aiyo ipo ivana thitta koda time illa.. (vegama poi kilambunen.. idhuku idaila appa call vera vandhuchi.. avarukita koda olunga pesa mudiyama kilambi odunen..)

Ready agi clg ku ponen.. anga haiyaa vishal ninnutu irundhan..

Me-hey ne epo kilambuna..
Vishal-epdiyo kilambiten..

Me-enaku apurm dhane ne endhirichi irupa.. sollu olunga..
Vishal-face wash panidu(mela spray pandra mari action panunan..) vandhuten..

Me-adapavi..kulikalaya nee..  ::)
Vishal-andha palakkam elam illa..  :P

Me-karumam karumam..
Vishal-sari last class notes vachi irukiya..

Me-aiyo marandhuten vishal..
Vishal-hey enna di sadharanama soldra..

Me-iru naan poi eduthu varen.. (na anga irundhu nagarndhen.. apo vishal oda kai ena pudichidu..)
Vishal-enga odra.. ipo.. already odi vandhadula unaku moochi iraikudhu.. first thanni kudichidu.. class la poi utgaru.. excuse ketukalam..

Me-inaiku full ah excuse kekuradhulaye pogudhu.. avunga ena katha porangalo (pesite rendu perum class kulla vandhom)
Vishal-vera yarkita excuse keta..

Me-warden kita.. mrng rithik ah walking pogum bodhu pardhen.. Avanum avan thatha um pesidu irundhanga.. so late ayidu..
Vishal-avankita elam yen ninnu pesidu iruka..

Me-avan pardhu pesum bodhu munja thirupikitu poga mudiyuma.. ne yen ipo kova padre..
Vishal-na onnum kova padala.. unakaga dhan soldren.. ipo ne dhane warden kita avanala dhane thittu vanguna..

Me-its ok vishal.. one day dhane..
Vishal-adi nee munna mari illa.. ne marita.. (sollidu avan bench la utgarndhutan..)

Me-na maritena.. unaku naan avankita pesuradhu pudikala nu sollu..
Vishal-na apdi lam onum sollala..

Me-pinna maritena ena meaning..
Vishal-mam varanga.. (avan thirumbikitan.. mam vandhu class start panunanga.. enkita notes illama utgarndhu irundhen.. en bench mate ava na eduthu varalanu therinjiyum kandukadha mari thirumbi utgarndhu irundha.. ena pandradhu nu yosidu irukum bodhu.. vishal en pakadhula note vaika varum bodhu vizhundhutu..)

Mam-what happened aditi?
Me-mam.. (Avungala pardhutu vishal ah pardhen.. avan edhuvum theriyadha mari utgarndhu irundhan..)notes..

Mam-hmm take it.. (sollidu avunga velaya pardhanga..)

Avan notes eduthu2 avana pardhen.. but avan ena parkala.. na epdi panuveno apdi avan irundhan.. Na andha note open panunen.. na kudutha note dhan still en name ah adikama vachi irundhan.. adhuku kila vishal nu irundhuchi.. elkanah ah matum adichiten.. crct ah aditi vishal nu irukura mari irundhuchi.. anaiku class mudinjidu.. Afn elarum kilambunanga.. na vishal kaga wait panunen but avan ena parkama stri8 ah poitan.. pinnadi nithis um vandhan but avanayum kandukala..

Me-vishal.. dei idiot.. :(  >:( (inaiku naan avan pinnadi odi vandhen.. but avan vegama poitan.. enaku eraichadu nala ninnen.. )
Nithis-ennachi sis rendu perukum marupadi prblm ah..

Me-mmm bro.. rithik ah mrng walking pogum bodhu meet panunenu sonnen.. sudden ah maritenu soldran..
Nithis-avanum dhan maritan da.. munadi la epovum chatting, kadala podradhu nu irundhan.. but ipo elam yarkita um avan pesuradhum illa.. avanoda fb girlfrnds koda yen avan engala block panunanu enaku msg pani uyira edukuralunga..

Me-avanuku niraya frnds ah bro..
Nithis-aahha track vera route la pogum polave.. irundhuchi ipo illa nu soldren ma.. ipo elam un puranam dhan.. ne nikhil pathi pesunale avanuku vayira puliya karaikum ipo rithik kita pesurana.. adhu pasanga feeling ma unaku puriydhu..

Me-avan apdi elam illana take it easy person.. avan epovum full freedom ah edhir parpan.. edhayum kanduka matan.. ninga ena ipdi soldringa..
Nithis-avan take it easy person dhan.. avan epovum free bird mari edhayum kandukama dhan irundhan.. but indha love yara ma mathama iruku.

Me-ohh ipo na ena pandradhu bro..
Nithis-nee onum pana venam.. avane varuvan.. venum ah paru.. ena kupta vara mari kuptu2 una kuptuvan..

Vishal-dei nithishh..(avunga solli vaaya moodala.. avan nithis kuptu2 ena pardhan.. na pardhadum nithis ah pardhan) sapta varalaya.. aprm hstl ku pona warden late ayidu thittuvaru nu katha kudadhu..
Me-naan onum varala nu sollunga bro.. :(enaku sapdu venam nu sollunga (na avana parkama thirumbikiten.. avan ena pandranu oora kannala pardhen..)

Vishal-deii na una dhan kupten vaa da.. (nithis kai ah pudichi iludhutu ponan..)
Me-adapavi.. deii idiot.. vishal panni.. naaya inga oruthi mrng la irundhu saptama iruka.. kandukama pora.. (poidu irundhavan sudden ah thirumbi pardhu enkita vandhan..)

Vishal-mrng saptalaya…
Me-illa :(  ::)

Vishal- apo poi sapta vendiyadhu dhane.. unakum serdhu nana sapta mudiyum..
Me-uuuu vishal.. I ll kill u.. (avana kaludha nerikura mari ponen..)yen da ipdi pandra..

Vishal-epdi.. (avan en face ah pardhan.. aprm thalaya right side 90 degree thiruppi ground ah pardhutu irundhan..)
Me-ipo yen enamo mari pesura..

Vishal-ena ipdi pandrangura.. enamo pesuranga.. enna na panuna una ipo.. (konjam nakkalum voice vol ah increase pani kovama pesura mari pesunan..)
Me-U don’t know..? (Sudden ah vishal shirt ah pudichikiten..)

Vishal-enna.. (Avan en kanna pardhan..)
Me-Nee ena love pana vachite iruka epodhum..  ??? I love you  ??? (avanoda lips la irundhu thana sirupu virinjidhu..)

Vishal-love you too baby.. :) (unmayana siripu avankita irundhu vandhuchi.. avan ena suthi hold pana vandhan..)
Me-chiii unkoda serndhu na bad girl ah mariduven.. po da..  :P (en kaiya avan shirt la irundhu eduthu ponen.. avan en kaiya pudichikitan..)enna..
Vishal-nee ena bad boy ah mathama irundhale podhum de.. wawawa ;)

Me-unaa.. kill uuuu :D (avana adichen..)
Nithis-deii inga oruthavan nikkuradhe marandhutingala da..

Vishal-una yaru da nikka sonnadhu..
Nithis-adapavii oora therinjikiten ulagam purinjikiten kanmani en kanmani.. (avan poitan..)

Vishal-enna bby ipdi elam dialog enga kathukura.. overa tamil movie parpiyo…
Aditi-movie ah.. sari sollu en life la na ethane tamil movie pardhu irupenu..

Vishal-ahh.. 10
Aditi-10 la irundhu onnu ah eduthudu..

Vishal-9 ah..
Aditi-1, 0 adhula irundhu 1 ah..

Vishal-hey nee tamil movie ye pardhadu illaya..  :o
Aditi-noo.. :( amma allow pannadhu illa..

Vishal-unaku movie parka pudikuma..?
Aditi-no.. news channel animal planet, ngo dhan..

Vishal-sutham…  ::)
Aditi-enna..

Vishal-superrr nu sonnen machu.. sari sapta polama.. pasikudhu..
Aditi-hmm polame..

Rendu perum saptukitu irundhanga.. Apo vishal oda senior vandhnga..

Sr-vishal seekram va una coach kuptraru..
Vishal-saptu2 varen na..

Sr-illa urgent ah meet panum ah.. kuptraru..
Vishal-sari tho varen na.. hey sorry bby.. nee saptu2 kilambu na enna nu ketu varen..

Me-hey na dance practice la dhan irupen.. nee pardhutu anga vandhutu da..
Vishal-hmm sari.. (na dance nu sonnadhume avan face lite ah change anuchi..)

Vishal coach ah parka ponan.. na avan illama thaniya utgarndhu sapta pudikama mrng saptalaye nu try pani saptukitu irundhen..

Hey aditi inga ena thaniya utgarndhu iruka..
Me-(ivana)rithik..  :o

Rithik-heyy yen ivan inga vandhanu kekura mari reaction kudukura..
Me-illa illa apdi elam illa.. (saptadhu podhum nu enthirichiten)

Rithik-hey yen saptama enthirikura.. disturb panitena..
Me-illa rithik.. saptuten..

Rithik-poi solladha.. vishal illama unaku thaniya sapta pudikala.. n na vandhadum kilambura.. crct ah.. cha unkita kekuren paru.. epdiyum illa nu dhan solla pora.. ne ipdi saptama irundha vishal ku pudikuma.. sit..
Me-(na soldradhuku munadi avan sonnadhum avankita ena pesuradhu nu theriyama utgarndhuten.. avanum utgarndhutan..)

Rithik-na romba stri8 fwd aditi.. so mathavangalum apdi irundha enaku pudikum.. but enakaga mathavanga mathikuradhum pudikadhu.. edha irundhalum sportive ah eduthupen.. so nee unaku ena thonudho adha sollalam.. unaku na pesuradhu pudikalana pesala ok va..
Me-hmmm..

Rithik-indha hmm ah.. na pudichi iruku nu eduthukava pudikala nu eduthukava..
Me-nee sportive ah eduthupanu sonnadhukaga soldren.. enaku unkita pesa edhuvum illa adhunala dhan enaku unkita pesa thonala..

Rithik-good.. pesuradhuku edhvadhu irundha pesalama..
Me-hmmm..but enkita pesa ena iruku..

Rithik-don’t mistk me aditi.. inga enaku therinji nee vishal dhan tamil therinjavanga.. so unga koda frnd irukanum aasai padren. That’s it.. una disturb pandrenu ninaichina na poidren.. (avan enthirichitan..)
Me- (avan pesunadha ketadhum avana thappa ninaikurom nu feel vandhuchi.. )sorry..

Rithik-then frnds..forever.. (avan kaiya neetunan..)
Me-sure.. (nanum kai kuduthen..)

Rithik-hey thank u so much.. :) (avanoda rendu kaiyum en kaiya pudichikitu..)
Aditi…

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#Love_12

Me-vishal… :) (enaku avana pardhadum happy ah irundhuchi.. but avanoda kannu en kaiya parthadum face reddish ah marunichi..cuz adhu rithik kai kulla irundhuchi.. na kaiya eduka try panunen..)
Rithik-hey buddy.. aditi ah thaniya vitu2 enga pona.. pavam thaniya utgarndhu irundha.. apurm avala crct pani frnd aguradhukulla pada pattuten.. :) paren ava munja epdi mulikura nu..(avan still en kaiya pudichi irundhan…)

Vishal-aditi unaku dance class ku time agala.. (avan kaiya enkita neetunan.. na ivan pudila irundhu viduthalai aga thavichidu irundhen..)
Rithik-hey na koda marandhuten.. nanum varen buddy..

Me-rithik kai vidu.(nane avan kaila irundhu eduthuten. Avan ena confused ah pardhan) enaku head ache ah iruku..na hstl poren.. (rithik kita sollidu vishal ah pardhen.. avan reththam kothichi avan moochi katru soda veli varadha enala feel pana mudinjidhu..)
Rithik-hey ennachi..

Me-onum agala rithik.. apurm parkalam.. (adhukulla vishal thirumbitan..)
Rithik-hey (edho soldra mari rithik kai ah pudichi iludhan.. vishal um thirumbi pardhan.. kovadhoda uchi la irukanu matum therinjidhu..)

Me-enna.. (rendu perula yara parkuradhu nu theriyama thavichen..)
Rithik-mrng walking varuvala.. apo parkalam nu solla vandhen..

Me-(sariyana loose ah irupanu thonuchi..)ok bye.. (vishal adhuku mela porumai ah illa vegama poitan..) vishal… (avan pinnadi naan odi poi avan kaiya pudichen.. sudden ah vishal avan kaiya udhari vitan..)
Vishal-nee en porumaya sothikura dhane..

Me-na enna panunen..
Vishal-enna panuniya.. unaku theriyum la enaku avana pudikadhu nu.. avan koda pesidu nikkura adhuvum kaiya pudichi..

Me-apo unaku oruthavangala pudikalana naan avunga koda pesa kodathu apdi dhane..
Vishal-apdi dhane illa apdi dhan..

Me-apo unaku en appa va pudikalana na avaru kodayum pesa kodatha..
Vishal-adhan oru time soliten la.. enaku pudikalana nee pesa kodathu..

Me-apo enaku oruthavangala pudikalana nee avunga koda pesa matiya..
Vishal-maten.. sollu yaru koda na pesama irukanum..

Me-un amma.. un appa, nithish anna..
Vishal-hey avunga unaku enna panunanga..

Me-adhu mari rithik ena panunan.. avan just frnd dhan.. nee Nikhil aah sonnadhuku koda naan accept panikiten.. adhula nyayam irundhuchi..
Vishal-nyayam illa unakum avana pudikala so nee avan kod pesuradhu illa.. but inga unaku rithik ah pudikum adhunala dhan nee support pandra..

Me-naan apdi sollala vishal..
Vishal-nee ivanukaga enkita argue panni iruka mata adi.. but na konjam konjama un priority la irundhu kila varenu thonudhu..

Me-illa vishal.. nee thappa purinjikura..
Vishal-crct na thappa dhan purinjikuren.. cuz na munna madhiri ipo illa.. we need break..

Me-break means…
Vishal-chinna pulla illa la nee.. eladhaiyum nane unaku sollanuma.. sari idhayum soldren.. break up..

Me-what..vishal… enala mudiyadhu.. I need u always..(sonnadhum thirumbi vandhan.. sandhosama irundhuchi.. but avan parvai adhuku idam kudukala..)
Vishal-im always there for u..  ??? and unmela irukura love epovum ena vitu pogadhu   ??? but na unoda freedom ah keduthuduvenu ninaikuren.. nee yarukoda pesanum nu ninaikiriyo avunga koda pesu.. but yarukoda pesurom nu pardhu pesu and appa um ponna um pirikura alavuku naan onnum koduma karan illa.. apdi oru love um thevai illa.. (sollidu avan poitan..)

Me-vishal..(na kupta kupta avan poite irundhan.. sometimes sila vishyadhula pasanga avunga decision edukuradha vida ponnunga adha edukanum nu ninaipanga.. adha inaiku na understd panikiten.. but andha afternoon en manasukulla niraya oditu2 irundhuchi.. enakum avan mela kovam vandhuchi.. enmela enna thappu iruku nu thonuchi.. na frank ah dhane iruken avankita apdi irukum bodhu ivan enmaela thappu nu soldran.. yen avan koda pesanum nu thonuchi.. apurm enmela ulla love epovum maradhu nu sonnadhum nyabagam vandhuchi.. epdiyum vishal enkoda pesiduvanu theriyum eve ground ku polam nu mudivu panunen..

Eve ground ku kilambi ponen.. Anga vishal practice la irundhan.. Na epovum utgara steps la utgarndhu irundhen.. But avan ena parkala.. Apo avanoda senior avana kuptu enna kattunanga.. na vandhu irukenu.. Avan ena pardhan.. Hai nu soldra mari kaiya katti smile panunen.. avan avanoda ball ah ground la adichidu thirumbitan.. Avaru avan shoulder pudichi ennachi nu kekura mari ketaru.. avungakita edho sonnan.. avaru ena pardhu vandharu..

Sr-hi aditi..
Me-hi..

Sr- vishal.. in practice.. so avanuku wait panadha.. (apdi nu avaruku therinja tamil la sonnaru..)
Me-avan solla sonna ah..

Sr-no na solludhu..
Me-na avankita pesanum..(adhukulla vishal avara kuptan..)

Sr-avanuku konjam coach n staff pressure kudukudhu.. don’t mistk him.. nee po.. na soldren..
Me-(nithis kita enna nu ketukalam nu kilambiten..)

Nyt vishal ku call panunen.. avanoda waiting la irundhuchi.. Avan familykita dhan pesidu irupanu theriyum.. so vachiten.. oru half n hour ku apurm call panunen.. ring anuchi.. call attend panala.. sari avane call panuvanu ninaichen.. but panala.. whatsapp la avanoda seen mrng vandhadha kattunichi.. Avanuku text panalam nu thonuchi..

Me-I miss you nu soldradha thavira enaku vera vardhai therila vishal..Cuz I really miss you.. And I feel ur love right now also….. unoda possessiveness enaku romba pudichi iruku.. una vida ena yarum ivlo nalla sandhosama enkoda kutti kutti sanda kindl panikitu andha memories ah una thavira vera yaralayum thara mudiyadhu.. thandhalum adhu nee ah irukanum.. en manasu una thavira vera yarukitayum sayadhu nu ena vida unaku nalla theriyum.. cuz u r my one love.. I love you and I meant it..  ??? indha msg na unmela vachi iruka love ah soldradhukaga illa.. enaku nee evlo mukiyam adha vida nama love evlo mukiyam nu soldradhukaga.. I ll be waiting for u vishal..  ???

Avanoda reply pardhu pardhu nyt apdiye thungiten.. Mobl call sound ketu enthirichen.. vishal nu.. but adhu nikhil.. Attend panalama venama nu yosichidu irundhen.. Call ah attend panama silent la potuten.. mobl data on la irundhadunala msg vandhu irundhuchi.. avanoda msg nu open pani pardhen.. But adhu Nikhil oda..

Nikhil-hey..
What doing?
R u busy?
There?

Achoo sethen.. udane mobl data off panunen.. ivan next call pandradhukulla nama call pani attendance potranum illa ivan edhavadhu edakodama paniduvanu ninaichidu call pana ponen.. Adhukulla call panitan..attend panunen..

Me-hello Nikhil yen indha time la call pandra.. thungidu iruken..
Nikhil-ohh really nee ivlo neram online la irundhutu ipo dhan offline vara. Thungidu irukenu soldriya..

Me-listen Nikhil.. na ivlo neram thungidu dhan irundhen.. frnd ku msg panidu irundhen.. Apdiye thungiten.. adhan online la irundhu iruku.. na un call sound ketu enthirichen.. adhukulla call miss agidu.. apo dhan pardhen wapp online la irukuradha.. un msg vandhadha ipo dhan pardhen..
Nikhil-en call ah pardha nee enaku call panama whatsapp ah check pandrana.. andha frnd ena vida imp anavangala..

Me-frnd nale imp anavanga dhan nikhil.. epovum kaila lap odayum.. business business nu andha mindla suthidu irukurangaluku adhulam imp ah irukadhu.. nalla frnds irukanum nama feelings ah share pana..
Nikhil-nee feelings share pananum ah un frndskita illa unoda fiancée enkita pannanum.. un frnds yarum unkoda vara poradhu illa.. na dhan iruka poren life long..

Me-ena oru property madhiri parkura unkita na enatha share pandradhu..
Nikhil-haa.. (nakkalana sirippoda perumoochi vandhuchi..)unoda feelings la 5 paisa ku projanam illadha feelings.. mathavangala depend paniye irukanum nu ninaikuradhum mathavanga unadepend paniye irukanum nu ninaikuradhum adhu kadaikalana aluvuradhum idhu dhan un feelings.. enaku adhula thevaiye illa.. nee enoda wife ah irukanum ah business way la un feelings ah mathiko..

Me-feelings ah yaralum kasu kuduthu vanga mudiyadhu..
Nikhil- I can.. na try panava.. un kannadha (avanoda voice vera mari marunichi..)

Me-nikhil unaku ipo entha velayum ilaya.. apdi irundha adha paru.. enaku thookam varudhu..
Nikhil-paravala mrng thoongiko..

Me-enaku mrng class iruku..
Nikhil- tmrw Sunday..

Me-so what na mrng church ku ponum.. good night..
Nikhil-heyy..pesidu irukum bodhu good night soldra idhu dhan unoda manners ah..

Me-thoongidu irundha enaya thoonga vidama disturb pandra idhu dhan un manners ah.. inga paru en room mate la irukanga.. avungaluku disturb agum.. na ph vaikuren..
Nikhil-avungaluku disturb agum ah nee studies ah quit panidu.. na epo pesureno apo enkita nee pesanum elka..

Me-I can’t..
Nikhil-I can.. oru call un amma ku panava..

Me-pls venam..
Nikhil- hmm apo na epo pesureno apo ena avoid panama pesu.. na ena soldreno adha dhan seiyanum..

Me-hmm seiren..  :'(
Nikhil-that’s good… ok u go n sleep.. good night..

Me-hmm good night.. (ph cut paniten.. enaku ena pandradhunu therila.. vishal ku call panalama.. venam avan thungidu irupan.. Avan break up nu solliyum en manasu avana dhan suthi vandhuchi.. bed la utgarndhute thungiten)

Next day morning enthirichen.. Walking poga pudikala.. msg ah pardhen.. vishal oda seen yday mrng ah dhan kattunichi.. Epovum church ku pogum bodhu vishal um enkoda vauvan.. andha ninaipula avanuku call panunen.. but mobl switch off nu vandhuchi.. enaku aluguradha thavira enaku vera therila.. church ku pogavum pudikala.. avanoda hstl ku ponen.. Vishal parkanum nu sonen.. avan ground ku poitanu sonnanga.. so nithishkita pesalam nu avana vara sonnen.. anga irundha oru paiyankita solli anupunen.. Ponavan thirumbi avan matum vandhan.. nithis um anga illa nu sonnan..

Me-rendu perum ground ku poitangala..

nanum ground ku ponen.. but ground la yarume ila.. enaku suthma onnume purila.. yarkita pesuradhu onume theila.. avanoda senior ah parkalam nu hstl ponen.. Apo dhan sikhar vandhan..

Me-hi sikhar..
Sikhar-ahh tell me aditi..

Me-vishal, nithis enga..
Sikhar-rendu perum room la dhan irukanga..

Me-(apurm yen illa nu sonnanga.. oru vela vishal illa nu solla solli irupano.. irukum..)ok..
Sikhar-any prblm..

Me-no..no.. just asked.. ne enkita sonnanu vishalkita solla venam.. una kochipan..
Sikhar-aditi.. vishal (avan parvai enaku pinadi poga na thirumbi pardhen.. vishal..)

Me-vishal… evlo unaku try panunen.. yen da idiot edukala.. (aasaiya avan pakadhula ponen.. avana pardhadum enakulla avlo sandhosam vandhuchi..)
Vishal-enna enkita solla venam nu sonna..

Me-adhu.. (sikhar enga convo puriyama ninnutu irundhan..)
Vishal-enkita maraikura alavuku na yaro madhiri ayiten la…

Me-vishal.. neeyum ena kolladha.. enala thangika mudila..
Vishal-unkita naan ena keten.. na unkita ketadhu unaku koldra mari irukuna yen nikkura po ena vitu poidu..

Me-yen yarume ena purinjika matringa..  :'(
Vishal-una nalla purinjikiten Ms.aditi elkanah.. thavu senji en munadi aludhutu nikkadha poidu.. (avan thirumbikitan..)

Me-poren.. but na thirumbi vara maten.. (na anga irundhu vandhuten.. enaku irundha kovadhula.. table la irundha knife eduthu kai naramba cut pana ponen.. Apo appa oda call vandhuchi.. adha kila potu2 attend panunen..)appa.. (thana aluga vandhutu..)
Appa-adi enna da achi yen aluvura..

Me-yen pa.. ena yarume purinjika matranga.. indha life ye enaku pudikala pa.. sethudalam pola iruku..
Appa-enna da ipdi lam pesura.. aditi ma..

Me-oru side andha Nikhil torture pandran.. (vishal pathi inum appakita solladha nala share panala..)
Appa-nikhil ena pandran.. sollu avana na pardhukuren..

Me-(ipodhaiku appakita soldradhu dhan crct nu thonuchi..)avan kanda neradhula call pani pesuran.. pesalana ammakita solli studies ah stop paniduvenu soldran appa.. na avanuku business property madhiri nu soldran..
Appa-ohh avan idhulam pandrana.. idhulam nee yen enkita first sollala.. nee ph vai ma inime avanala unaku endha prblm um varadhu.. na pardhukuren.. vera edhuvum illa la da.. edha irundhalum appakita thairiyama sollu da..

Me-hmm vera edhuvum illa pa..
Appa-nee epovum unaku pudicha mariye iru da.. yarukagavum nee maradha.. im there for u always.. don’t forget.. I love you always.. sethu poganum nu ninaikuravanga kozhai da.. nee kozhai illa.. edha irundhalum un manasu ku thonuradha sei da..

Me-sari pa.. love u too pa.. :) (appa vachitanga.. avungakita pesunadhu relax ah irundhuchi.. inime Nikhil pathi kavala pada onum illa..)yen vishal ena purinjika matran.. (idhu dhan engaloda 4th break up..)

Class la um avan class start panum bodhu varuvan.. class mudinjadhum kilambiduvan.. watsapp app ye delt panitana nu therila anaiku kattuna adhaye seen dhan irundhuchi.. dance class poradha stop panunen.. rithik rendu moonu time thedi vandhan.. apurm mrng walking pogum bodhu pesa varuvan.. avankita inime pesadha nu soliten.. idhuku idaila.. Nikhil kita irundhu oru call vandhu irundhuchi.. na kandukala.. appa um call pani inime payapadatha avan unaku disturb pana matanu sonanga.. avarkita sandhosama irukura mari kattikiten.. Enna prblm ne theriyama Vishal koda pesama 6 month odunichi.. orae class ah irundhalum rendu perum pesikave illa.. Avanoda face um edhayo izhandha mari irukum.. epovadhu accident ah pardhukitalum kannula kadhal ah mariachi vachidu kova parvai ah veesuvan.. nanum apdiye mariten.. epdiyum oru naal avan ena purinjidu varuvanu… rendu perum serndhu saptra andha canteen table la vera pair utgarndhu sandhosama pesidu irukum bodhu avan koda irundha memories ah vandhu pogum..

Enga kadhal meendum seradhukana andha naal vandhuchi..  ???

#Love_continues

Sakthi

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« Reply #49 on: November 19, 2016, 08:50:16 PM »
 Break up ..... :'( :'( :'(

Vipurthi

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« Reply #50 on: November 20, 2016, 06:05:00 AM »
Hi mys;) 6 month en fav couple a pirichi vachi neenga periya paavam panitinga :( atha vida 4th break up a mudichi sera irunthavangala sera vidama continue potutinga :( rmba mosam ;) anyways story super (nikil dog oda tholla illa:D bt adi & vish oda intha sanda enaku pidikala :( )

Sanviya

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« Reply #51 on: November 24, 2016, 05:23:02 PM »
Hi jezz story epo update panuvinga adi-vis epdi again seruvanganu therinjika eager ah wait panrom pls seekirama update pannunga

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« Reply #52 on: November 25, 2016, 08:25:38 PM »
Hi hi dankiu for the comments Sakthi & Vipurthi  :) :)

Sanviya update ipo than vanthu irku :) :)

Potruven ipo .. ensoi reading  :) :)  :) :)

Offline MysteRy

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« Reply #53 on: November 25, 2016, 08:26:02 PM »
Love_13



Aditi Narration

After 6 Months..

Epovum pola class poidu irundhuchi..Ipo elam na vishal kaga wait pandradhu illa.. avan enakaga wait pandradhu illa.. ground ku avanuga um poradhu illa.. Nithis enkita prblm nu solla maraichadunala avankita pesala.. Oru naal enaku class ponen vishal epovum pola avan desk la rendu kai la thalaya muttu kuduthu en desk ah pardha mari utgarndhu irundhan.. na vandhadum apdiye direction ah mathitan.. na avana kandukama vandhu utgarndhen..

Apo mam vandhanga..

Mam-hi student ungaluku inime class kadaiyadhu.. ruler development pathi documentry ready pannanum.. so ungaluku 6 month adhukaga ungaluku break.. 5 students oru group ah serndhu ninga documentary pannanum.. inga idhula unga group yaru nu indha sheet la iruku.. and ninga endha village ku ponum nu adhula irukum.. notice board la otti irukom pardhunga..
All-heyyyy… (elarukum happy ah irundhom..)

Break la elarum notice board parka ponom..

Nithis-endha village la potu irukanungoo.. tho iruku en name.. kursan ah.. enna da name ye oru madhiri iruku..
Vishal-enna da en name illa..

Nithis-adha vida en batch la elam orae pasangala irukanunga..
Vishal-adapavi.. apo naan unkoda illa nu peel illaya machan..

Nithis-angayavadhu enaya nimathiya vidra.. hey machaan  :o
Vishal-enna machi.. ena pirinjitenu peeling ah.

Nithis-illa da serdhu potutangalee :D
Vishal-enna da en peraye kanume.. serdhutanga nu soldra..

Nithis-enkoda illa.. aditi koda.. ikkata choodundi…  :P
Vishal-whattt.. iva kodayaa.. (vishal thirumbuna pinnadi aditi kaiya kattidu ninnu moraichitu irundha..)chi ivala.. Thalli nikka sollu da..pora vazhi la ninnukitu..  ::)

Aditi-thimiru pudichavan.. ivan koda elam serious ah enala documentary panna mudiyadhu.. ipove mam kita poren..
Vishal-ava pona nama poga matoma..

Nithis-dei yen da ipo thirumbi sandaya start pandra..
Vishal-enala elam ava koda panna mudiyadhu da..

Nithis-(ivan vera avala ethi vidrane.. ava vegama hod room ku pona… ethi vidathu eriyudhu pola)dei nee yen da ipdi pani tholaiyura.. vaa enna nadakudhu nu parkalam..(vishal ah pudichi iludhutu ponan..)
Aditi-mam.. naan enoda batch ah mathikanum nu ninaikuren..

Vishal-mam nanum.. (rendu perum moraichikitanga..)
Mam-sorry.. ungaloda batch ah change pana mudiyadhu.. university ku sent paniyachi..

Aditi-mam batch change pandradhukum university kum ena samantham iruku mam..
Mam-batch illa ma.. endha village yaruku nu selt pani irukuradha ninga dhan crct ah pannanum..

Vishal-shit.. (aditi ah venumne verupethunan..)
Mam-vara next week andha place poga ready agunga..aditi nee Lahore.. vishal nee.. ohh neeyum andha place dhana.. but andha place romba danger ana area.. nyt oorukulla puli elam varum nu solluvanga.. anga ulla forest kulla poita again varadhu romba kastam.. so epovum elarum onna ve irunga.. Andha ooru headkita ninga varadhakum veedu ready pana soliyachi.. sapadu elame avungale thandhutuvanga.. avlo dhan..

Nithis-puli kita matikitalum ninga avlo dhan da.. mam solli irukanga onnave irukanuma..
Aditi-bro konjam vaaya mooditu poringala.. (solidu ava poita..)

Nithis-namala poga solidu ava pora..
Vishal-namala illa unaya..ava apdi dhan da.. poda..(sollidu avanum poitan..)

Nithis-enna ivanum poda nu solidu poran.. ivunga rendu pera epdi serkuradhu nu therilye.. (yeah idhu dhan crct..)
Aditi-hstl ku poidu irundha..

Nithis-aditi konjam nillu..
Aditi-kadhula vangadha mari poidu irundha..

Nithis-aditi pls.. listen me.. (avaluku munadi poi ninnan..)
Aditi-who r u? na yen ungala listen pananum..

Nithis-nee kovama iruka nu theriyudhu but ninga rendu perum ipdi pesama irukuradhu enaku sutham ma pudikala..
Aditi-mudinji ponadha pathi pesadhinga.. avan avanoda promise la meeritan.. still na avana ninaichidu irukanuma.. indha 6 month la oru time enkita avan pesi irupana..

Nithis-avan still avoda promise ah break panama dhan irukan.. but unkita adha epdi soldradhu dhan avanuku therila..
Aditi-avan ena maraikadha maraikadha nu sollidu avan enadha maraikuran..

Nithis-anaiku srk ah avan adichan la.. adhunala avana sports team la irundhu reject panitanga.. enaiku ungaluku break up anicho anaiku dhan..
Aditi-enna soldra bro.. idha enkita yen maraichan.. edhukaga avan thevai illama avara adichan..

Nithis-ipdi elam nee kepanu dhan avan vilagi ponan..
Aditi-yen na therinja kodatha..

Nithis-idhu kandipa endha oru paiyanalum oru ponnukita share panika mudiyadha vishyam aditi.. adhunala dhan avan unkita sollala..
Aditi-ena nu sollu bro..

Nithis- unga hstl la oru ponna andha srk love pandrenu solli emathitaru.. adhuku andha ponnu mgmt la complaint panuna.. Avaru andha ponnu koda irundha pic la boys hstl pasangaluku sent panitaru.. Adhunala dhan vishal avara adichitan.. idhu mgmt ku therinjidhu.. vishal ah warn pani vitanga.. Mgmt avara adhula andha aala thukalam nu ninaichidu.. Apo dhan dance class start anuchi.. Anaiku nee dance partner selt panum bodhu rithik name vandhadu koda avanoda sathi dhan.. nee andha bowl la edha selt pani irundhalum avan name dhan vandhu irukum.. cuz andha bowl la ulla eladhulayum avan name dhan irundhuchi.. and nanga selt panunadhu vera bowl.. rithikoda dance panna vachi.. unga rendu perum serdhu poto edudhu adha vachi vishal ah pali vanganum dhan apdi panunan.. And neeyum rithik um pesum bodhu avan unaku theriyamale poto eduthutan.. adha vishal oda watsapp ku sent pani irundhan.. adha pardhatu mobl ah udaichitan.. anaiku avan apdi aludhu naan pardhadu illa.. andha pics la avankita irundhu delt pana poi kadaisi la avana team la irundhu thugitanga.. unkita avan nrml ah irukanum nu dhan avan try panunan.. ivanala una vachi viladuranu therinji dhan avane una vitu vilagi irukalam nu sanda potukitu vandhan.. enga nee marupadi avankita vandhu unaku prblm vandhuta kodathu dhan pesala..
Aditi-ivlo nadandhu iruku.. but rithik andha aalu yen idhula mati vitaru..

Nithis-correspondant oda paiyan.. avaru paiyan ah vachi avara black mail panalam nu ninaichan.. but indha matter rithik kita solli andha aaloda memory card ah udaichitanga.. mgmt adhunala dhan pathila culturals ah stop panuchi..and vishal rithik kita unkoda inime pesa venam nu ketukitan.. adhuku apurm dhan rithik una thedi varala..
aditi nama nesikuravanga namala avungakita pesadha ivungakita pesadha nu soldrangana adhuku reason avunga nama ctrl pandranga nu meaning illa.. endha vagaila um nama freedom yaralaiyum ketu poga kodathu nu dhan.. indha idadhula un appa irundhu irundhalum idha pani irupanga nu ninaikuren..

Aditi-avana naan thappa purinjikiten bro.. romba kalnenja karan nu ninaichiten.. I love my idiot..  :'( (ava kannula irundhu kanneer vandhuchi..)
Nithis-na sonnenu avankita sollidatha..

Aditi-haa idhu dhan engalukulla vandha prblm.. so ninga enkita solitenu sollunga Apo andha idiot oda face reaction ah pardhingana.. paaaah
Nithis-shu shu..

Aditi-enna bro..
Nithis-un story oda hero.. thirumbi paru.. (aala vidunga da sami..)

Vishal-nillu da.. (kaiya kattikitu ninnan.. Aditi avana thirumbi pardha..)
Aditi-ena bro hero nu sonninga.. inga villan dhan nikkuran.. (nithis shoulder la kai vachidu sonna..)

Nithis-aahhaa iva edhulayo korthu vida parkurale.. machi nekku onnum theriyadhu da..
Vishal-(ivan theriyadhu ah edhavadhu potu vitu irupano..)

Aditi-bro unga frnd oda mind voice romba kevalam.. whole clg kum kekum pola..
Vishal-deiii olunga vara poriya illaya da.. ivakita ninnu ena pechi..(iva yen ipdi parkura..)

Aditi- sariyana kalnenja karan bro ivan..
Vishal-edhuku ipo thevai ilama enkita pesidu iruka.. (avan face ah thirubikitu pesunan..)

Aditi-nithiskita poga soldra mari action kattuna.. avan kalandukitan..
Vishal-deii enga da pora.. (ipdi thaniya vitu2 poitane.. ivala koda samalichidula iva kanna samalikuradhu dhan perumpaade.. kathi indri enkita irundhu unmaiya vangidum)

Aditi-theriyudhula apo unmaiya solidu.. (ava avan pakadhula pona..)
Vishal-hey unkita enala pesi jeika mudiyadhu di.. aala vidu.. (avan anga irundhu oda pardhan.. avan kaiya aditi pudichikita..)

Aditi-nee enoda porumaya sothichi parkurala.. (avana moraichi pardha..)
Vishal-(avanuku avan soldra mari irundhuchi..)

Aditi-enna yen avoid pandra adha sollu..
Vishal-hey unkita sollanum avasiyam illa..

Aditi-appo enna kalati vidalam nu parkuriya..
Vishal-illa.. ahh ama..

Aditi-hahahahaha :D
Vishal-ipo yen lusu mari sirikura..

Aditi-ahh ellame therinji theriyama nikura paru unnaa.. idhu ena alaya vitadhuku (sollidu kannadhula oru punch kuduthu2 pona..)
Vishal-(aiyoo pressure cooker ku kovam vara arambichidu pola.. face la red agudhe..)

Aditi-ena kalati vidravana irundha na ipo arainchaduku pathiluku arainji irupan.. yen da ipdi iruka.. enakaga evlo pani iruka.. serious ah enoda appa nala matum dhan enaku andha secure ah thara mudiyum nu ninaichen.. but nee adhuku mela enaku pani iruka vishal.. nee ena vitu vilagi irundhu dhan idha pani irukanuma.. edhukaga enoda freedom kaga va.. I really undestd which is true love.. en appa chinna pulla la enaya velila garden la vilada vida matanga.. na en freedom ah koraikuranga ninaichen.. apo appa veedu servantkita solli garden la ulla mul chedi la remove panidu ena vilada sonnanga.. apdi dhan neyum ipo pani iruka.. en life la vara irundha mul chedi ah remv panidu ipo enaku freedom nee thandhu iruka.. en love ah vida un love pure.. I love you vishal..  ??? unkita irundhu indha kadhal ah epovum edhir pardhutu irupen..
Aditi-but ipovum nee ipdi nikkura paru.. una.. I hate u vishal..  :-*

Sudden ah shirt ah iludhu avanuku kiss kuduthuta..

Vishal- ahhhh  :o (kiss kuduthu verukuravala ipodhan da na parkuren..)
Aditi-neeye vandhu pesura varai na pesa maten.. idhu dhan nama life la vandha 5th break up.. but don’t forget I ll be waiting for u..  ??? cuz u r my one love always..  ??? (sollidu pona kannu ooram vandha alugai ah thodachidu..)

#Flashback_End

Aditi- ipovum en kannula andha kanneer thuli vandhuchi.. Stage la avan engaloda documentary ah explain panidu irundhan.. Apo apo enna pardhutu irundhan.. yennachi nu kekura madhiri ena pardhan.. na smile panadhum avan face la happiness vandhuchi .. Avan documentary explain pani mudichadum.. elarum avankita questn ketanga.. Avan adhuku ans panum bodhu avanoda love ah enala unara mudinjidhu.. enaku onnu ah avan dhan first varuvan..

Avan ans pani mudichidu en pakadhula vandhu ninnan..

Vishal-enna flashback elam run pani mudichitiya..
Aditi-2 inum iruku idiot  :P

Vishal-pavam la naan.. unna evlo samalika vendi iruku..
Aditi-yaru pavam nu avungaluku theriyum.. indha thanni ah kudi..  :P (water ah neetuna..)

Vishal-apurm next..
Aditi-result theriya venama..

Vishal- aiyo sethuten da saami..nee venum ah utgarndhu paru.. enala mudiyadhu..aala vidri..
Aditi-hey

Vishal odi vandhutan.. Apo rithik anga vandhan..

Rithik-hey machi..
Vishal-hii machaan.. ena indha side..

Rithik-today dhan doc submit pana porenu sonnala machi.. adhan unoda performance ah parkalam nu vandhen..
Vishal-rombaa seekram vandhuta da.. adhula mudinjidu.. aditi dhan result kaga wait panidu iruka..

Rithik-ohh ok ok machi.. kandipa ungaloda dhan varum.. sari nithis enga..
Vishal-avana hstl la thungidu irupan da..

Rithik-yen avan submit panala..
Vishal-selected matum submit pani irukanga da.. avan documentary edukava ponan.. nalla tour adichidu vandhan..

Rithik-apo nee enna machi panidu vandha..
Vishal-adhuu..

#Vishal_Narration

#Flashback _Start

Andha problem ku apurm nanum aditi um pesala.. But nanum rithik um nalla frnds ayitom.. Ella vishyadhaiyum nithis aditi kita solitan.. But engalukulla adutha break up vandhuchi..

Aditi-neeye vandhu pesura varai na pesa maten.. idhu dhan nama life la vandha 5th break up.. but don’t forget I ll be waiting for u..  ??? cuz u r my one love always..  ??? (sollidu pona kannu ooram vandha alugai ah thodachidu..)
Vishal- haha inime naan dhan ava pinnadi suthanum.. Aditi ivlo naal evlo kasta pattu irupanu enaku nalla theriyum.. epovum engaloda break up minimum one week irundhu irukum.. Apovum vambu valardhutu pesiduvom.. but indha 6 month alai oda osai illa kadal mariyum.. kuyil oda kural iladha kaadu mariyum thendral iladha maram mariyum moochi illa udal mariyum ava illama naan.. valichidu.. avakoda irundhu kasta padutha vilagi irundhu sandhosama parkanum nu ninaichen.. Avakita yen pesanum nu ego elam illa.. ana avakita vambu valakuradhu still enaku pudichi irundhuchi.. adhu dhan engaloda kadhal um koda..  ???

Naan edhukaga indha clg ku vandheno adhuve illama poochi.. andha dance master nala.. Naan yen social activities la involve aga kodathu.. inime naan eduthu vaikura ovvoru step um en kadhalukaga um aditi kaga um irukanum nu thonuchi.. Inime avale poga sonnalum naan poga maten.. endha problem ah irundhalum avakoda irundhu face panuvenu nane enakkulla promise panuven.. idhulam ava kudutha oru kiss nala illa..  :P ava inum enmela vachi iruka kadhal nala..   ???

(Love to be contd..)

Vipurthi

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Re: ~ One_Love ~
« Reply #54 on: November 25, 2016, 11:46:05 PM »
Hi mys;) story super bt oru breakup laye innoru break up aa? :( adhi is really a heart touching char;) I luv her char ;D

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Re: ~ One_Love ~
« Reply #55 on: December 01, 2016, 04:02:33 PM »
Hi hi Vipurthi , hru ?
Dankiu for keep on giving ur feedback to tis story  ;) ;)
Next 2 part on the way  ;) ;)
Ensoi readingzz  ;) ;)

Offline MysteRy

Re: ~ One_Love ~
« Reply #56 on: December 01, 2016, 04:10:35 PM »
Love_14 & 15



#Love_14

#Vishal_Narration

#Boys_Hostel

#Time: 4.30

Nanga andha village ku pora day um vandhuchi.. Mrng ye kilambuna dhan andha place ku nyt aguradhukulla poga mudiyumnu.. seekram elupi vitanga.. endhirichadum window open panunen.. adhikaaalai pani enoda mugadhula adichi udambukulla irundha thookadha viratunichi.. en thukam ponadhuku karanam adhu matum illa.. enaku nera girls hostel.. adhula Aditi..  ??? idhu dhan enoda puthunarchi ku karanam..

6 month aditi koda dhan en life travel aga pogudhu nu ninaikum bodhu semma happya irundhuchi.. Nithish um kilambi en room ku irundhan.. nanga panuna alaparai la en senior vera room ku oditaru thunguradhuku.. eladhaiyum eduthu vachidu irundhom..

Nithis-deii ipo dhan eduthu vaikuriye.. amma inga irundhu irundha una kondrupanga.. ne last time la kilamburadhuku..
Vishal-nalla vela nyabaga paduthuna da.. (en mobl ah pardhen.. amma already call pani irundhanga..)

Nithis-deii nee first kilambu da.. amma ku bus la pogum bodhu koda call panikalam..
Vishal-apdinguriya sari..machi una romba miss pana poren da..

Nithish-but enaku nyt un tholla illama seekrame thungiduvenu happy ah iruku da  :P
Vishal-adaeiii iru dii una nyt thunga vidama call pani koduma paduthuren..

Nithish-switch off panidu thunguven..
Vishal-naan vandhu una mithipen  :P

Nithis-unmaya sollava miss u da.. epdi dhan una vitu2 irupenu therila.. schl la irundhu idhu varai nama pirinjadhe illa idhan first time da.. :(
Vishal-elarum oru naal pirinji dhane aavanum machi.. :(  :P

Nithis-adaiii kondepuduven pardhuko.. olunga daily call panu.. signal illa time illa sonna pichipuduven pichi..
Vishal-hehe pandren da.. neeyum panu.. I eealoviii youuu machi..  :-* (nithis ah pinnadi irundhu hug panikitu.. kannadhula aludhi kiss panunan.. )Apo crct ah rithik um anga vandhan..avungala sent off pana..

Rithik-deii enna da pandringa..
Nithis-ealove panidu irukom machan.. neeyum vaa elove panalam..

Rithik-dei ninga ealove panunadhu podhum.. kila bus vandhutuchi da vanga.. aditi koda vandhuta..
Vishal-aiyayayo vandhutala (andha pressure cooker ku kovam varadhukulla poitanum..)odunan..

Rithik-enna machi.. aditi nu sonna udane ipdi odran.. ambutu love ah da..
Nithis-ama ivan odi poi avala verupethuvan.. ava kova pattu kathuva..adhu la ivanuku oru sandhosam.. venum ah paru namala pardhadum chii vishal ah pardhadum parkadha mari thirumbikuva..

Rendu perum bag eduthukitu kila vandhanga.. Anga aditi koda matha students um ninnanga.. vishal poi ninnadhum.. aditi engala pardhutu vedukku nu thalaya thiruppikita..

Rithik-deivame.. ninga engayo poitinga..
Nithis-ipo paru da.. enna sis engala pardhadum thirumbikura..

Aditi-apdi elam illa bro..
Nithis-ohhh indha bad fellow ah pardha.. (vishal nithis ah moraichan..)

Rithik-nee rendu perukitayum vanga pora nu ninaikuren da..
Aditi-(vishal ah pardhutu)na onum yarayum parkala..  ::)

Nithis-irundhalum vedukkunu thirumbama methuva thirumbi irukalam..  :P
Vishal-unkita ketala da.. poradhukulla edhvadhu panni vitradha da chumma iru..

Aditi-(ku lite ah siripu vandhudu.. thirumbikita.. vishal ku adha pardhadum apdiye kuthikanum pola irundhuchi..)
Nithis-ninga dhan break up ah 1,2,3 mari count panidu irukingale apdi edhavadhu nadandha.. idhayum counting la serdhuka vendi dhane..  :P enna machi.. (rithik kita ketan..)

Rithis-crctuu machi.. aditi..
Aditi-( vishal ah pardha..)

Vishal-(enaku onum theriyadhu nu madhiri avala pardhan..)
Aditi-(apurm rithik ah pardha..)enna rithik..

Rithik-im sorry enala unaku konjam prblm ayidu.. adhuku vishalkita pesama irukuradhu kastama iruku paavam avan.. pls pesu..
Aditi-illa rithik.. actually unaku thanks sollanum rithik.. nee panuna help ah enala maraka maten.. but mathavangalukaga nee support panama un velaya paru.. thanks.. (vishal ah pardhutu thirumbikita..)

Vishal-unaku thevaai ah da.. naan ketana..
Rithik-illa machi. Na pesalana entha prblm vandhu irukadhula..

Vishal-hey vidra..

Apo staff vandhanga..

Mam-listen students.. elarum avunga avunga laggage ah safe ah vachinga.. apurm ungalukana map adhu epodhum kai la ye irukanum.. two weeks ku once report pannanum..
Nithis-yara da report pannanum..  :P

Mam-ungaloda work epdi poidu iruku nu report pannanum..
Rithik-enna machi.. nee tamil la pesuradhuku andha mom hindi la ans panudhu.. what ah chemistry…

Nithis-ipdiye kordhu vitu vedikai parunga da.. frnd nale yen da ipdi cmdy role la thalli vidringa..
Vishal-cuz frnds nala matum dhan machi sandhosama sirika vaika mudiyum.. matha relationship irukae adhu epo paru pichikitu poradhulayum aludhu oppari vaikuradhulayum poite irukum.. frndship dhan machi great.. (nithis shoulder la kaiya potukitu ethardhama aditi ah pardhan.. ava avunga relationship ah pathi dhan soldranu gandu agi avana moraicha..) aiyoo nane vaaya kuduthu pun agipen polave..

Nithis-already pun agita da..  :P

Nithis um rithik um sirichikitanunga..

Rithik-semmaya mattunan da..
Vishal-chumma irunga da avala ethi vidathinga..

Nithis-nee first(ego vitu) erangu da.. apurm eralam..
Mom-elarum bus la erunga..

Rithik-deii nee eranga soldra ava era soldra.. what aa timing machi..  :P
Nithis-deiii nee first inga irundhu kilambu da.. elaraiyum kordhu vitukitu..  :P

Rithik-sari sari feel panadha machi.. ok machis pardhu poidu vanga..
Vishal & nithis-ok machan..u too take care.. (moonu perum hug panikitanga..)

Rithik- aditi take care..
Aditi-hmm ok.. :)

Rithik-bye da.. machi aditi ah pardhuko da olunga.. (vishal kita aditi ku kekadha mari sonnan)
Vishal-hmm ok da.. (sollidu aditi ah pardhan..)

Nithis-avan inime parkuradhu matum dhan velaya vechi irupan da.. nee pardhu poidu va da..
Rithik-sari machans.. bye.. (avan anga irundhu kilambitan..)

Elarum bus la erunanga.. girls la frnt seat la um boys la back seat la um utgarndhu irundhanga.. Aditi steps ku pakadhula ulla seat la ye utgarndhukita.. elarum avunga avunga pair ah vitu piriyuradhula peeling ah irundhanga.. except nama hero..nanum nithish um apo dhan mela eri vandhom.. ava ena pardhadum.. face ah windowkita thiruppikita..

Mam-listen students.. (nanga angaye ninnutom) na unga batch stdents read pandrom elarum irukangala nu pardhunga..
All-okk mam… (mam ella batch la ulla name um read panunanga.. Enga batch read panunanga..)

Mam-aditi, arjit, misha, vishal, zeenath.. ninga 5 perum pora place khuda lahora.. andha place konjam educated dhan but village konjam mosama irukum pardhunga.. and zeenath varala.. so ninga naalu perum dhan pannanum.. and students unga doc ah ninga thani thaniyavum panalam serndhum panalam.. adhu unga unga istam..
Some1-apdiye enga pair oda serndhu pana permsn kudunga mam..

Mam-u naughtiesss…shut up..  :P

Nanga enga place ku vandhutom..

Nithis-deii amma ku call pandrenu sonniye panuniya da..
Vishal-ohh tho da.. (amma ku call panunen.. call attend anadhume..)

Amma-eruma madu naya.. evlo neram da wait pandradhu..
Vishal-aiyo thaaye laggage pack panave time achi… shhh vaaya vitutena..

Amma-nethiye una pack pana sonnen la..
Vishal-sorry dear.. thungiten..

Amma-sir apdi enna vetti kilichinga..sari aditi um unkoda varala da..
Vishal-vara.. adhuku ena..

Amma-adhuku ena va.. avakita pesi evlo naal achi da.. kudu da avakita phone ah..
Vishal-adhula onnum venam..

Amma-deii enayum pesa vida matra.. avalayum pesa vida matra.. enna da ninaichidu iruka un manasula.. epo ketalum.. avala parkala ground la irukenu uttans ah vitra.. enaku theriyadhu inaiku na pesiye aganum.. (ena team la irundhu dismiss panadhu theriyadhu.. ipo indha trip ke match ilaya neyum poriye nu ketanga.. whole class ponum nu solli maintain pani vachi iruken.. and nanum aditi um pesala nu solla feel panuvanga nu adhaiyum maraichiten.. epovum aditi pathi kekum bodhu samalikuradhu dhan romba kastama irundhuchi..)
Vishal-sarii.. dei nithis phone avakita kudu da..

Nithis-evakita..
Amma-neeye poi avankita kuduka vendiyadhu dhane da.. avana yen poga soldra..

Vishal-sari kathada poren.. (nane enthirichi ava seatkita ponen.. ava window la sanji kanna moodi irundha..)adi… (epo da ivan voice keponu mari udane ava kanna thorandha ava face la avlo happiness kannu la love ava kannadhula oru blush..but apdiye oru sec la poi angry symbol ah kondu vandha..)amma pesanumam..
Aditi-ohhh kudu.. (ava mobl la vangikita.. na anga steps kita erangi ninnen..)hello aunty.. epdi irukinga..

Vishal-(ava face la avlo happiness..) Na thirumbi sanjikitu andha adhikaalai kulur katra en udal veppadhukulla katti podra mari en kaiya kattikitu ninnen..
Aditi-ama aunty.. andha idiot romba busy.. adhan pesa mudila..

Vishal-(nalla vela ava potu kudukala..)
Aditi-ahh ama aunty.. (ava ena pardha..)ok note paninga aunty.. 76*********

Vishal-(aiyo aiyo num pooche num pooche.. inime ivaluku la stri8 ah call pogum.. yen payapadranu parkuringala.. amma um girl frnd kulla understding illana koda nama thappichidalam.. rendu perukum nalla understding irundhuchi.. uruluradhu nama thalaiya dhan irukum.. )
Aditi-sari aunty.. vishal kita tharen.. indha mobl..

Vishal-hmmm.. (avala parkama mobl la vangunen..)
Aditi-line la irukanga..

Vishal-ok ok.. hello ma.. pesitiya.. hello ma..
Aditi-epovo cut panitanga..  :P (ava en pakadhula vandhu kekum bodhu kadhukita avalo moochi katru vandhuchi.. avaloda free hair en face la vandhu pattuchi.. andha hair oda sweet smell um andha katroda smell um andha athikaalai ku semmmaya irundhuchi.. na thirumbunen.. ava hair ah iludhukita.. apo ava kannu enna pardhuchi parunga.. idha ivlo naal miss panitenu thonuchi..)sorry.. (ava hair adjust panidu killa kunichita vekkadhula..)

Vishal-hmmm… idhu lam enga dhan stack vachi irukangaloo.. Apo apo kattunga de…

(Naan en place la vandhu utgarndhen..)

Nithis-enna da vandhuta..
Vishal-yen da..

Nithis-illa poniye angaye settle ayitiyo nu ninnaichen..
Vishal-hmmmm… :)

Nithis-enna da sirichite iruka..
Vishal-yen da siricha koda kuthama?

Nithis-illa kannu la kadhal kalandhu ulladhe any interesting news undo..
Vishal-undallooo

Nithis-nee wasteuu da.. (face la kerchief ala porthikitu thungunan..)
Vishal-deii thungadha da..

Nithis-yen da ipdi imsai paduthura.. thunga viden da..
Vishal-6 month ena vitu2 happy ah dhane iruka pora.. ipo konja neram varai enkita pesidu vaayen da..

Nithis-enaku girlfrnd irundha koda ipdi koduma padutha mata da.. nee yen da ipdi paduthura..
Vishal-nee en uyir nanban da..

Nithis-adhan uyir edukuriye..
Vishal-hehehe.. :D

Nithis- ipdi palla kattiye en thukadha kalaichida da.. (avankita pesidu vandhadula nithis ku thukame kalainjidu..)
Vishal-una elupunadhula na tired ayiten.. good nyt machi.. (avan kanna moodi nithis shoulder la sanjikitan..)

Nithis-yeii idhula romba over machi.. ena elupi vitu nee thungura..
Vishal-hey thungu da.. (oru kaal eduthu nithis melayum kaiya eduthu nithis kaludhayum potukitu bed la thungura mari thungunan..)

Nithis-deii parkuravanga vera mathiri ninaipanga da..
Vishal-chumma moodikitu thungu da.. (kanna moodikite thukadhula sonnan)

Nithis-idhuku mela enalayum mudiyadhu.. nithiss thungu daaa… (avan thalai ah vishal thalai la uttu kudutha mari thungunan..)

Schl clg tour mari kathikitum sound vitukitum indha travel illa.. elarum amaithi ah thungidu vandhanga.. Konjam konjama athikaalai pani vilagi adhula irundhu suriyan oda velicham orange color ah veesi andha bus la ulla kannadi la pattu bus kulla oli veesunichi.. Elarum konjam konjama kanna thorandhu Chandigarh oda azhaga rasichidu vandhanga.. Pachai kodhumai(wheat) vayal veli ah azhaga sari samama pirikura varappu.. engayo thooradhula andha pachai vayaloda kanna moochi aadi ena kandu pudi nu soldra suriyanoda etti parppu.. kutti kutti kuruvi nga ilaigala ulla paniyil mugatha thechi udala silikura andha kaatchi andha bus la ullavangaluku ilavasa kankaatchi ah aachi..

Nithish wake up.. we reached our place.. nu yaro sonnadhula vishal oda thukam kalainjidhu.. Vishal kanna thorandha nithis avana hug pani thungidu irundhan.. vishal avan thukadhula irundhu full ah endhirichan..

Boy-harre nithish bhaiyaa.. wake up..
Vishal-wait I ll wake up him.. deii enthiri da.. un place vandhuchi..

Nithis-hmmm…
Vishal-ivan ipdi la sonna enthirika matan.. ipo endhiripa paru da..(nithis kannadhula kadichi vachitan..)

Nithis-aahhh amma.. eruma madu yen da kadicha.. (seat la irundhu enthirichan.. vishal sirichikitu utgarndhu irundhan..)
Vishal-una eluppa 10 peru varanuma.. unoda place vandhutu da.. laggage ah eduthuko..

Nithis-ohhh vandhuta.. :(
Vishal-ipo yen munja thugi vachi iruka..

Boy-bhai hurry up..
Nithis-hmmm..

Vishal-nee poo.. na bag eduthu2 varen da.. (avana munadi anupitu nithis bag ah eduthu2 vandhan.. Aditi irukala nu frnt seat la pardhan.. avala thavira elarum ivanunga panuna kootha pardhutu irundhanga.. Avan step la erangum bodhu pardhan.. ava nalla window la sanji thungidu irundha..)

Nithis-enna sis thunguradha sight adikuriya..
Vishal-apdi onnum azhaga illaye..

Nithis-ahh ahh edha irundhalum en bag ah kuduthudu paniko da..
Vishal-hmm.. miss u da.. call panu adikadi da..

Nithis-hmm pandren neeyum panu..sis ah pardhuko.. sanda potukite irukadha da.. nalla njoy panu da..
Vishal-po da poda.. pardhukuren (sollidu aditi ah pardhukitan..)

Nithis-ne pardhupanu theriyudhu.. unayum pardhukoda.. tata machi miss u.. (avana hug panikitan..)
Vishal-(avanuku enamo mari irundhuchi avana piriyuradhu.. ivana feel pandradha pardhu avan feel panuvanu smile panikitan..)pardhu irundhuko.. edhuna onnuna call panu da udane..

Nithis-oh machi.. report pandrapo meet panalam da..
Driver time achi nu katha

Nithis-sari machi nee eru da..
Vishal-(bus la eri step la ninnan.. bus move anuchi rendu perum tata kattikitanga.. Apo oru turning la thirumbum bodhu bus shake anadhu la aditi payandhu window kita kaiya vacha.. Vishal bal kaga kaiya vachi irundhan.. ava kai avan kai ah pudichidu.. vishal avala parka.. avalum shock agi pardhutu kai eduthuta..)

Aditi-inga ena nikkura..
Vishal-yen nikka kodatha..

Aditi-sorry(yen da ivankita vaaya kuduthom nu mari munja vachkita..)
Vishal-ipo dhan nithis erangunan.. una pardhuka sonnan..

Aditi-enaku enaya pardhuka theriyum..
Vishal-haiyoo avan una dhan unaya pardhuka sonnan.. na yen unaya pardhukanum..

Aditi-chi ivankita poi pesunadhuku idhuvum venum inamum venum..
Vishal-(avan manasukulla sirichite avan seat ku poi utgarndhan.. nithis illama oru mathiri irundhuchi..)



#Love_15

#In_Bus

Apo Vishal pakadhula avanoda batch mate arjit vandhu utgarndhan..

Arjit-hai vishal, im arjit.. :) (kaiya neetunan..)
Vishal-haii.. :) (nanum kai kuduthen.. but ivankita ena pesuradhu nu therila..)

Arjit- avlova naan class la yaru kodayum interact panunadhu illa.. adhu mari enaku avlo frnds um illa.. inime ninga dhan enkoda iruka poringa nu ninaikuren.. (romba innocent ah um shy um pesunan.. but avan nalla fit ah irundhan.. Konjam parka harbhajan singh mari irundhan..)

Vishal-hmmm..(en life la nithis irukura edadhula inime travel aga poradhu ivan dhan..)
Arjit-anaiku village pathi sonnadhu romba pudichi irundhuchi.. aditi nalla thairiyamana ponnu.. ninga rendu perum frnds nu ninnaikuren.. am I crct?

Vishal-yeah…(adhukum mela nu sollanum thonuchi..)
Arjit-and ungaluku Lahora pathi theriyum la.. konjam hard ana place adhu.. forest cross pani poganum.. day la romba veyil irukum.. eve parkuradhuku munadi iruttu vandhutum..nyt la romba snow irukum.. nyt la velila poga matanga.. sila neram puligal um varadhuku vaaippu iruku..

Vishal-Apo idhu varai edhavadhu puli peoples ah attack pani iruka.. (payadha kattikama avankita keten..)
Arjit-illa ipo rare dhan.. village suthi mul veli pottu irukanga kulla varadhu korainji iruku.. mirugangal irukura forest ah alichi angayum building la katturadhunala dhan.. adhunga oorukulla varudhu..

Vishal-crct dhan..

(Next one hr la adutha batch erangunanga..)

Arjit-next nama dhan nu ninaikuren..
Vishal-(Avan laggage ah eduthukitu irundhan.. Nanum eduthukitu kilambunen.. Elarum engala edho nanga military la poi sera poravan mari pesadhavan la.. engala hug pani take care nu solli engaloda laggage ah eduthukitu vandhanga.. aditi um misha um kilambunanga.. Girls bye take care nu solidu avunga velai la muligitanga..

enadhan selfie la munja otti otti serndhu ninnalum.. elam oru particular time varaikum dhan adhuku apurm bye smile oda mudinjidum.. but boys apdi illa yarunu therilanalum nanbanoda nanbanoda nanban ah irundhalum avan nanban mari anupi vaipanunga.. idhu dhan girls frndship kum boys frndship kum ulla diff nu sollalam.. Aditi avaloda laggage ah eduthukitu thirumbi engala pardha.. illa ena dhan pardha.. Adhuvum na enthirichitana illa thungidu irukena nu parkura sandhega parvai.. cuz epovum crct time ku edhayum na senjadhu illa.. but indha vishyadhula ponnunga crct ah irupanga.. Avungala oru good reminder, memory storage pandra memory manager nu koda sollalam.. indha vishyadhula boys ah vida girls crct ah irupanga.. Adhulayum appadi patta ponnu nama lover ah nama avlo dhan.. kalugu mari kanna nama mela vachi irupa.. Adhu koda oru vidha love dhan.. Adhu dhan ipo aditikita irukuradhu  ??? )

Nanga eranga vendiya place vandhuchi..

Mam-vishal, arjit, aditi, misha.. indha letter ah lahora oda president kita kuduthingana ninga stay pandradhuku place kudupanga.. Sapadu thevaiyana things tharuvanga.. ninga dhan senji saptukanum..
Misha-edhu nangale seiyanuma..  ::)

Mam-yen samaika theriyadha..
Misha-sudu thanni koda vachadu illa mam..

Mam-adjust paninga.. pardhu irukanga.. crct ah report panunga..
All-ok mam..

Na kila erangunen.. Aditi ava bag eduka kasta pattukitu irundha.. Na Kila erangi en bag ah vachidu avaluku help pandradhukaga bus ponen..

Misha- vishal konjam en bag ah eduthu thara mudiyuma..
Vishal-ohh sure.. (iva vera..)

Aditi-enodayum eduthu venum..  ::)
Vishal-hmmmm( :) nama innoru ponnuku help panum bodhu nama girlfrnd oda face ah pardha Bangalore thakkali mari ayidum face.. adha pardhu rasikuradhu la oru thani sugam..)

Misha ku eduthu kuduthen.. Ava eduthukitu kila erangita.. Aditi oda eduthukitu irundhen.. Ava kila eragi cool ah ninna.. Ava parvai eduthukitu kila erangu da nu soldra mari irundhuchi.. Nanum ava bag ah kila eduthukitu erangunen.. engala vitu2 bus ponuchi..

Vishal-bag eduthuko..
Aditi-ok.. (ava bag iludhukitu nadandha..)

Vishal-hello bag eduthu thandhaduku thanks la solla matingala..
Aditi-hmm solla mudiyadhu

Arjit-are u ok? (avan enoda bag ah eduthu kuduthan..)
Vishal-yeah..(nanum avanum pinnadi vara..aditi um misha um pesikitu nadandhanga..)enna dhan pesuvalungalo therila..

Arjit- enna..
Vishal- apdi ena dhan rendu perum pesite irupanga nu therila nu sonnen.

Arjit-hahaha.. kandu pudikuradhu romba kastam bro.. avunga ulagam romba perusu namanala understd panikuradhu romba kastam..
Vishal-hmm adhuvum crct dhan..

Nangalum pesikite vandhom.. Apo aditikita yum mishakita um yaro pesidu irundhanga.. parka romba terror ah irundhanga..

Misha-hey arjit vishal seekram vanga namala kuttidu poga vandhu irukanga..
Arjit-nenga elam yaru..

He-Ninga dhane Punjab university la irundhu varadhu.. indha ooru president ungala kuttidu vara solli engala anupunaru..
Vishal-adha nanga epdi namburadhu..

Misha-avaru dhan soldraru la.. President kuttidu vara sonnaru nu.. polam..
Vishal-enaku enamo sariya padala..

Aditi-unaku enaiku dhan sariya pattu iruku.. epovum edhavadhu sandhogam dhan..
He-time achi.. irutturadhukulla poganum..

Arjit-polam vishal.. adhan soldrangale..
He-bag kudunga eduthu varom…

Vishal-illa nangale eduthu varom..
He-amma nenga.. (aditi um misha um style la hand bag matum matikitu matha bag ah avungakita kuduthanga..)

Arjit-inum evlo thooram poganum..
He-inum 30mins agum..

Misha-ohh avlo neram nadakanuma..
Vishal-Adhan kai la onum illama jolly ah dhane vara apurm ena..

Misha-nengalum bag ah kudutha.. engala mari jolly ah nadandhu varalam la..
Vishal-paravala nenga jolly ah nadandhu vanga..

Aditi-avanuku lite ah nama mela porama..
Misha-ama ama..

Vishal-ipo nee yen mooka neetura.. na avakita dhane pesidu varen..
Aditi-nee dhan mooka nolaikura na avakita dhan sonen..

Arjit-hey guys..enaku enamo nama wrong route la pora mari iruku.. anna nenga enga poidu irukinga..

Andha aalu avarkoda vandhangalum avan kuptadhuku kadhula vizhadha mari nadandhanga..

Arjit-something wrong vishal.. na already indha ooruku vandhu iruken.. nama left side varanum ivunga stri8 ahh poranga.. andha side verum kaadu dhan irukum.. hello nillunga.. nenga enga poringa..
Vishal-r u sure?

Arjit-yeah im sure..
Aditi-ennachi..

Arjit- avunga thappana route la kuttidu poranga.. ninga ingaye nillunga.. na ennanu kekuren.. (avan laggage ah vachidu avungakita odi poi ketan.. Apo adhula irundha oruthavan pudicha avana thallitu odunanga..)
Vishal-arjit… (na avana pardhu oodunen.. )

Arjit-avanunga thirudanunga..
Misha-thirudan ah.. (avalum aditi um thirudan thirudan nu katha arambichita..)

Vishal-ninga rendu perum ingaye pathrama irunga nanga poi pudikurom..
Aditi-na unkoda varen.. arjit mutti la adi pattu iruku..

Vishal-illa illa nee inga ye iru.. nane poren..
Arjit-nanum varen

Vishal-(nanga avanungala pudikuradhukaga odunom.. Adhula oruthavana matum matikitan.. avan ella things um potu2 ena thalli vitu2 oditan.. arjit inoruthavana pudika ponan avanum oru bag ah vitu2 kaattukulla oditan.. Adhuku mela avanala odavum mudila..)

Arjit-avan kaattukulla oditan vishal.. inga edhavadhu police irupanga.. nama complaint kudukalam..

Aditi um misha um odi vandhanga..

Aditi-ennachi..
Vishal-indha rendu bag matum dhan kadaichidu..

Misha-idhu rendum enoda..
Arjit-indha oru bag..

Aditi-thank god idhula enoda lap, camera la irundhuchi..but enoda inoru bag..
Vishal-ohh andha periya bag ah aattaiya pottutana..  :P

Aditi-viladatha vishal adhula dhan enoda dress la irundhuchi..
Vishal-idhuku dhan theriyadhavangakita bag ah kuduka kodathu nu soldradhu.. unga bag ah ninga eduthu2 varadhula ena kastam iruka pogudhu.. idhula social activities la akkarai katturadhu.. apdiye rendu perukum aara vidanum.. (common ah soldra mari aditi ah pardhan..)

Aditi-sorry..  :(
Vishal-hmm.. (nanga marupadi crct route la ponom.. aditi vara vazhi la elam polambikite vandha.. Konja neradhula andha oorukulla vandhom.. Anga oruthavarkita president veedu address ah ketukitu avaru veeduku ponom.. Avaroda adi aalu(security) engala stop panunaru,,)

Sec-yaru ninga.. indha neradhula..
Arjit-nanga Punjab university students.. social training kaga anupi irukanga.. president kita indha letter ah kudunga..

Sec-hmm nillunga.. (avaru enga 4 peraiyum oru thadavai pardhutu enaya thaniya pardhan..cuz arjit, misha n aditi parka oralavuku punjab oda vaasam oda color otti irundhuchi.. nama tamil nadu singam avanuku konjam diff ah therinjen.. avan parvaiye be careful nu soldra mari irundhuchi..)
Vishal-yen ipdi pardhutu poran..

Arjit-inga elam pasanga ponnunga elam serdhu palaguradhu kadaiyadhu vishal.. adhan.. ivunga kita konjam careful ah irukanum.. ivunga ponnangakitayo pasangakitayo pesuradha avoid panikanum.. illana nama thalai irukadhu..
Vishal-hmmm..(na aditi ah pardhen.. ava already ena dhan pardhutu irundha.. avan sonnadha ketu ava face la payam therinjidu.. enga na yarkitavadhu kadala potu2veno nu payam.  :P sonnadhu kadhula vizhundhucha nu kekura mari irundhu ava parvai..)vizhundhuchi vizhundhuchi..

Arjit-enna..
Vishal-nothing.. (avankita solidu avala pardhen.. ava sirichite ena pardha.. kulur vara vara ava kaiyala hug panidu ninnutu irundha..)

Misha-epo dhan varuvaru…   ::)
Arjit-adhukulla tired ayita..

Misha-evlo thooram nadandhu vandhen.. enala inime mudiyadhu.. na utgara poren.. aditi..
Aditi-illa neye utgaru.. (sollidu ena pardha..)

Misha-sari po.. (ava anga irundha step la utgarndha.. crct ah president um vandharu.. ava payandhu poi again enga side odi vandhu ninnukita.. Ava edho kola panidu vandha mari moraicharu andha president.. apurm dhan therinjidu avaru parvaiye apdi dhanu..)

Pesident-ninga dhan andha students ah.. clg la irundhu solli irundhanga.. ungaluku andha veedu ready pani irukom.. inaiku nyt ku sapadu ungaluku kondu vandhutu vanga.. ungaluku help ku oruthavanga varuvanga.. things elam vachachi.. 5 peru nu solli irundhanga..
Arjit-oruthavanga varala..

President-hmm sari.. ivungala alaichidu ponga..
All-thank u sir,..

Aditi-inga police station enga iruku..
Pre-yen..

Aditi-enoda laggage ah thirutidanga.. nanga vara vazhi la rendu peru..
Pre-ohhh.. avungakita pona things kadaikadhu ma.. irundhalum nane adha police ku soldren.. ninga unga work ah parunga..

Aditi-thanks sir.. (but avaluku avaroda ans la nambikai illa..)

Andha security nanga thanga pora veeda kattunaru.. key kudutharu..

Sec-6 maniku elam.. enga irundhalum veedukulla vandhutunga.. unga place ah ninga dhan suthama vachikanum.. (Sollidu ponaru.. pogum bodhu vishal ah pardhutu ponaru.. )
Vishal-andha aaluku ena dhan enmela avaruku apdi oru love ohh..

Aditi um misha um veeda exhibition mari pardhutu irundhanga.. rendu room kitchen hall..adhula endha room peruse adha misha um aditi um pudichikitanga..nanga micha irundha room ku vandhutom.. enga room la vachidu.. dress change panidu hall ku vandhom.. Apo um ulla pona andha rendu ponungalayum kanum.. Arjit ena parka na avana parka utgarndhu irundhom.. Mobl la net on panunen..)

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Nithish-machii na reach ayiten da.. :)
Hey machan inga ulla pannaiyar(village president) ku oru ponnu da semmma alaga iruka da..  ???
Deii eruma reach ayita da.. thoongu munje naya.. thungitiya da..  ::)
Machi bore adikudhu da.. :(
Miss u machan.. :(
Vishal-ipo dhan da vandhom.. oru prblm ayidu da.. but onum serious la illa.. aditi bag ah thirutitanga.. ipo dhan arjit sonnan.. pannaiyar ponna sight adicha thala poiduma pardhu irundhuko.. sight adika kannu irukadhu  :P Saptiya da.. miss u da..

Avanuku msg ah thatti viten.. Apovum andha maha rani nga room la irundhu varala..

Apo oru patti vandhanga..

Patti-ninga dhan vandhu irukuradha.. idhula sapadu iruku saptunga..
Arjit-sari patti.. (avan oru perfect hindi pesuravanala avane mostly communicate panunan..)

Apo dhan aditi velila vandha.. Same dress la..

Vishal-sapadu vandhutu..
Aditi-hmm

Apurm misha vandha..

Vishal-paahhhh.. enna make up da… thunguradhuku edhuku make up..
Misha-pasanga ninga konjam parkura mari irukanum la..

Vishal-parkura mari irundha podhum.. Pa..
Aditi&Misha-ennna..

Vishal-payandhu odura mari venam nu solla vandhen.. thappave purinjikuradhu..
Aditi-nanga onum thappa purinjikala.. un manasu thappa purinjikudhu..

Vishal-en manasu thappa purinjikudhu nu unaku epdi theriyum.. apo un manasum thappa thane iruku.. (rendu perum tamil la convo panunadhunala.. moonu perum puriyama ninnanga..)
Paatti-ennachi yen ipdi sanda potukuringa..

Aditi-avan apdi dhan paatti sanda potukite irupan.. (ava hindi la andha paattiku sonna..)
Paatti-Sanda pottukitu irukavanga dhan ma nama la nalla purinji vachi irupanga..

Vishal-u r crct paatti.. (avunga kannadha killunan..)
Paatti-nanum inga dhan thanga poren.. ungaluku ena vela senji tharanum nu sollunga na senji tharen..

Aditi-ninga vela elam senji thara venam paatti nangale senjipom.. ninga enga koda irunga adhuve podhum... (Avale enga naalu peruku sapadu eduthu vacha.. Chapathi panneer kurma..)

Elarum hall la utgarndhu saptom.. Arjit um misha um thunga poitanga.. Andha paatti hall la paduthukitanga.. Aditi avunga appakita pesidu irundha.. Naan ammaku call panunen..

Vishal-(call attend anuchi..)hey sudha vandhuten de..
Amma-sari sari night ku saptingala da..

Vishal-ipo dhan..
Amma-aditi..

Vishal-ipo dhan nu soldren la..(aditi ah pardhen..already ava ena pardhutu irundha.. Apo dhan avunga appa call cut anuchi..)amma pesuriya..
Aditi-hmm kudu..

Vishal-amma aditi kita ph kudukuren pesu..
Amma-kudu da.. (avakita kuduthen..)

Aditi-ahh aunty sapten.. (Avakita same questn ketu irupanga pola..)
Aditi-ahhh nalla iruku.. set ayidum nu ninaikuren.. (place epdi iruku nu ketu irupanga.. enakullaye question tag panikiten..)

Ava konja neram pesidu enkita kudutha..

Vishal-enga amma shreya ve kanum.. enga pona..
Amma-ava ooty ku poi iruka da..

Vishal-ohhh ama la sonnala marandhuten..
Amma-sari aditi ah pardhuko da.. pudhu edam vera.. thanni la suda vachi kudi sari ah..

Vishal-sari sari advice ah stop panu.. un purshan pesunara..
Amma-avaru epovo pesidu duty ku poitaru da..

Vishal-nyt shift ah appa ku.. appo nyt call panuvaru nu sollu  :P
Amma-chii vai da eruma madu.. poi thungu..

(pesite aditi ah pardhen.. ava enamo enakagave wait pandra mari utgarndhu irundha..)

Vishal-sari sari nee njoy.. na thunguren.. good night.. tata..

(avunga cut panunadhum.. enaku ena pandradhu avakita pesuradha room kulla ponuma.. ava yen ivlo neram utgarndhu iruka enakaga va nu questn oditu irundhuchi enakulla..)

Vishal-thunga pola..
Aditi-hmm poganum.. new place la konjam late ah dhan thukam varum..

Vishal-sari utgarndhu iru.. na thunga poren.. (Apdi sollum bodhu ava face reaction ah parkanume..)
Aditi-poi nalla thungu.. good night..

Vishal-yeaahhh rihanna dreams…   :P
Aditi-wawawa rihanna dreams ah.. dreams.. pei dream ah varum..

Vishal-una ingaye parka mudila kanavula veraya..
Aditi-chi poda…

Vishal-chi podi..
Aditi-idiot..  ::)

Vishal-thank uuuu  ???
Aditi-(ava face sirippu vandhuchi..) :)

Vishal-adhan siripu vandhutula vaaya vitu sirika vendi dhane..
Aditi-haha.. kilambu..

Vishal-aiyoo enaku thukame poochi.. (na vandhu anga irundha chair la utgarndhen..)ipo dress ku ena pana pora..
Aditi-ahhh un dress dhan podalam nu iruken..  ::)

Vishal-ohh apdiya.. iru varen.. (avan room kulla ponan..)
Aditi-ivan enga poran.. unmaile dress eduka poitana.. (ninaicha mariye.. avan dress ah eduthu2 vandhu enkita neetunan..)enna..

Vishal-dress ketala.. potuko..
Aditi-naan un dress ah ya..

Vishal-purshan dress ah pondati podradhu onnu thappu illa..  :P
Aditi-nee onum en purshan illa..  ::) (manasukulla happy ah irundhuchi..)

Vishal-shhhh ama la marandhuten.. na un pondati la.. apo nee idha podalam thappu illa.. potuko pursha..  :P
Aditi-viladatha.. (kovama pesura mari act panuna)

Vishal-viladala serious ah dhan soldren.. idhu na podala.. new dhan potuko..
Aditi-illa naan misha odaya adjust panikuren..

Vishal-ok ur wish.. andha kundu thakkali oda dress ah potukitu tholapola nu suthu elarum lusu nu ninaipanga..
Aditi-its ok.. no prblm..

Vishal-apurm un wish.. (dress ah angaye vachidu.. avan thirumbi utgarndhu irundhan..)
Aditi-ava vishal ah pardhutu utgarndhu irundha.. lite ah avaluku thukam vandhu.. andha sofa la thungi vizhundha..

Vishal-(enna sound ye illa ma iruka poitalo.. thirumbi pardha ava thungidu irundha..ivala elupalama venama.. ingaye thunguna ivaluku cold vandhutume..) aditi.. oye.. gulab jamun.. kannadha apdiye kadichi saptalam pola iruku.. (kaiya kannadha pikka pona sudden ah mulichikita..)
Aditi-yei enna pandra..

Vishal-onum illa.. thungitiya adha elupa vandhen..
Aditi-hmmm ok na thunga poren..

Vishal-hmmm ok..
Aditi-good night.. (ava room ku poita)

Vishal-(kilambitan.. dress ah marandhutu poitan..)

Aditi avan poitanu vandhu pardha andha dress angaye irundhuchi.. ava adha eduthu2 vishal kita kudukalam nu pona.. apurm andha dress ah hug panidu room ku vandhu change panikita.. Avalukulla avlo sandhosam ah irundhuchi..

Aditi-inime en kadhal enkodave irukum.. Andha idiot niraya love vachi irukan.. katta matran.. Avanoda ovveru parvai um ava munadi vandhu ponuchi..sirichikita..

Andha night kadhal pani oda payanam anuchi..

(Love to be contd…)

Hima

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« Reply #57 on: December 01, 2016, 09:33:21 PM »
Stry semma pa....loved it :-*

Vipurthi

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« Reply #58 on: December 02, 2016, 12:41:47 PM »
Hi mys ;) epi really super:) ipidi nijamana life la lovers irupangala? :) bt iruntha atha vida happy life ulagathula vera engayume irukithula :) enaku intha one love kathaya again & again read pana adhi & vish paira inum rmba pidikithu ;) I luv it:D

Sanviya

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« Reply #59 on: December 03, 2016, 07:37:47 AM »
Story semma mys:) vishal-aditi pair super story interesting ah iruku jezzy