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~ Ninaivellam Nee Thane - Short Story ~
« on: April 22, 2016, 07:49:17 PM »
Written by Mahe _ Krish



Epovum trafficala nondhu poyi en scooty ah urutikitte ofc ku late aagirumo apdi late aana andha black facial moonji HR kitta vaaya kudukanume nu kadupulaye daily na ofc pora indha road uh ipo ivlo kaathu vanguthu.

signal kuda off Agirchu. ivlo free ah indha road La na scooty ottitu poitu irukathu ithu than first tym .

Vandiya ottikitte En kaila kattirundha watch ah parthen adhula tym 12. 46.12 am nu katuchu  aana adha pathi enaku kavala ila 😐

ithuku mela yum avana nambitu enala iruka mudila
Inaiyoda 12 days aachu avankuda Sanda pottu , adhuku apro avanta irundhu single msg fone Cal edhume ila naai fb watsap La kuda Ena block panitan

indha 12 days La ethana tym avan num ku try paniten epo paru not reachable en num ah rejected list La than kandipa vechirpan Yena na love panra paithiyathuku thimuru over loaded , aanalum adhelam therinji than na avana love panren . epovume enaku set aagatha dress ah kuda othiki veikura na epdi enaku edhulayume othu pogatha Ivan kuda set aanen nu ipo vara therila

vasiyakaran vaai onu pothum nimshathula suthi iruka athana perayum avanuku fan ah mathiri van. apdi than Nanum vizhuntheno ??

Ipo kuda nanthan avana thedi indha Nadu rathri La poitu iruken, Vera Ena seiya ovr ah lov pani tholachitene, ila avan mela na paithiyam aagura alavuku avan than Ena mathitan , Ena senjane therila avan Ena panalum enaku avan mela iruka lov matum apdiye than iruku andha love than ipo Ena indha alavuku risk eduka vechithu

. enaku Vera vazhi ila inum ethana naalaiku avan foto ahyum avan kuda chat Pana old msgs um parthu feel panitu irukarathu ,evlo mudiyumo avlo feel paniyachu evlo azhanumo avlo azhudhachu ithuku mela enala avana varatum nu wait Pana mudiyathu Yena avan Ilama enala normal ah iruka mudila

road La ofc La engayume avan matum than en nenapula vanthu verupethuran. ithuku lam oru end card poda than ipo avana parka avan mansion ku poitu iruken

Andha mansion irundha road La en scooty ah Valachen road La light kuda erila apo nu parthu oru naai Vera kozhaika start panuchu enkulla oru bayam sudden ah.

ipo matum avan kuda irundha avana irukuma kattitu andha naai kitta dhariyama shhu vaai moodu nu adhathatiirpen aana avan iladhanala indha naai kuda Ena seendi parkuthu , irukatum gavanichukren una.

epdiyo avan mansion munala konndu poyi vandiya Park panunen anga irundha watch man Ena partharu

Watch man : enna venum?

Na adhu edhayum kadhulaye vangikala andha periya hall oda kadhava puduchu vegama aatikite avan pera solli kathunen

Me : nivinnn
Nivinnn veliya vaada
Watch man : hello madam yaru neenga indha nerathula vanthu ipdi satham podreenga

Me : nivinnn
Watch man : pls ponga madam Ilana en velaiku prachana aagirum

Me : Anna ungalku vela than prachana enaku Inga vazhkaye prachana sry purinjikonga
Nivinnn

(apo rendu moonu room oda door thorakra sound ketuchu)

Me : (enkulla andha sec La oru excitement engakulla iruka athana prachanaiyum thandi 12 days apro na avana Paka poren nra andha excitement matum than en manasu muluka.

en kannu avana theduchu en kanna thavika vidama avan Odane veliya vantan Yena enoda voice avanuku epdi theriyama irukum . na avan kanna parthen na nenacha mathiriye avanum thoongama than irundhurkan nu avanoda seventhu irundha kanne soluthu.

Nivin Ena nokki than vanthutu irukan edho avan kovama pesran ena parthunrathu avan face expression laye enala unara mudinjathu. aana sathyama avan Ena pesran nu en mind observe panave ila avan inum kitta vanthan en shoulder ah puduchu vegama ulukunan apo than na present ku vanthen

Nivin : manasaa ethana tym kuparen apdiye nikura
Manasa: en Peru kuda nyabagam iruka ?

Nivin :ufff Inga edhuku di vantha (kovama ketan)
Manasa : na love panra poruki Inga than irukan apro Inga varama

(avan Ena ongi oru Ara vittan ethir parthathu than adhunala na perusa edhum shock lam aagala na ara vizhundha kanathula Kai vechikite kannu kalanga avana parthen avan frnd um watch man Elam than shock Ah parthanga )

Watch man :thambi  :o
His frnd : deii Ena da panra  :o

Nivin : sry (avan en kaiya puduchu iluthukittu konjam thooram thali ponan)
Nivin: paithiyama De ne. paduchava thane arivilla , Ena manasula ne America La irukatha nenapa indha nerathula thaniya drive panitu adhum indha mathiri mansion iruka area La avlo dhariyam unaku yaru kudutha manasa ? ketka yarum ila nra nenapa tholichirven rascal  >:(

Manasa : 12 naala ketka aal ila than na irukena ilaya nu kuda ketka
Nivin : adhuku nu ithan nerama Manu mani Paka theriyum La mandu ku

(avan en kaiya iluthu en watch ah en moonji munala thirupi neetunan )

Manasa : ippch 1.30
Nivin: palla thatirven mariyathaya kelambu Va. thimuru puduchavale

(avan en kaiya puduchu iluthan)

Manasa : vidu Ena Vida thimuru kolupu Elam unaku than adhigam ithana naala kandukala La ipo matum Ena akkara vidu na epdi pona Ena
Nivin : Manasa en porumaya romba sodhikra solten

Manasa : ne sothichathatha vidava
Nivin : solte iruken ketka Matiya

(avan again Ena oru Ara vittan )

Manasa : I lov u  :'((azhuthukitte sonen)
Nivin : sariyana loos ah love pani tholachuten  :D

Manasa : (habaa siruchutan na avana kaluthoda serthu hug panikitten )
Nivin : Manu pakranga Ellam

(avan Ena avanta irundhu velaki nirutha try panan)

Manasa : street light kuda eriyatha oru area ithula yaru Paka pora adhum indha nerathula
(na again avana kattikiten)
Nivin : ne kathuna kathula ottu motha mansion eh muzhichurchu de

Manasa : Yen Ena kalati vidra idea edhum vechirkiya
Nivin : chi naaye

Manasa : pina yaru partha Ena ?
Nivin : ama endha moonja vechitu Ena parka vandha

(avanum Ena tight ah hug panikite ketan nanga epovume ipdi than first Samanthanam aagipom ana kovam pogatha mathiriye nadipom)

Manasa: ne ena thorathi thorathi love panum pothu endha
moonji irundhucho adhe moonji vechitu than  :P Avan chest La sanjikite sonen)
Nivin : inime en moonjile muzhika maten nu sonnava enga ?  :P

(avan en mandaila chellama thatunan)

Manasa : Nadu road la Nadu rathirila Nivin oda nenjula sanjitu
nikura
Nivin : indha tym neeya than vanthu pesanum na vara maten nu sonava enga

Manasa : Ena panrathu ava love panra mundathuku thimuru
jasti adhu oru agarathi
Nivin : agarathi ah thedi edhuku di vandha ?

Manasa : Ena seiya dictionary La thane elathukum artham
kidaikum andha mathiri than enakum na thedra en
vazhkayoda motha arthamum Un kitta than da iruku saniyane
Nivin : apro Yen di ithana naala wait Pana saithane

Manasa : epovume nane than first erangi varanum La
Nivin : ne thane Sanda potta

Manasa : ne thane Sanda varathu ku reason ah iruka
Nivin : sari sorry kelre

Manasa : apo ne en kaal La vizhriya?
Nivin : ne mudha sry kelre

Manasa : sry thane

(na avana en height ku vara mathiri kaluthodhoda kattirundha kaiya vechi avana en pakama iluthu avan kanatha kadichitu)

Manasa : ithu en kuda ithana naala pesama irundhatha ku
Ithu Ena ithana naala kandukama irundhathuku
Nivin : hyo vendam ne sry eh ketka vendam vitru di valikuthu

Manasa (na avana pesa vidama avan ava vaaya modunen)

Ithu Ena block panathuku apro ithu en num ah block list La pottathu ku apro ithu ipo Ena rendu vaati aranjathuku

(konjam nalla valikura mathiriye kadichu vittuten avan valila en
kaiya puduchu thali vittutu alara aaramichutan)

Nivin : hyo valikuthu di nijama na onum una reject list La
podala
Manasa :edhu enaya

(avan kanatha puduchu killunen)

Nivin : hyo chi Un num ah di
Manasa : Pina .

Nivin : unta Sanda potta kadupula fone ah thooki adichen adhu
La Elam part part ah kalandu pochu adhula Sim engayo tholanji
pochu pudhu Sim inum activate aagala
Manasa : ithu lam thevaya

Nivin : Pina Un mela Ulla kadupa epdi katrathu
Manasa : vanginathu pathala La

Nivin : haiyayo pothum .
Manasa : ha ha ha  ;D

Nivin : ithana naala indha siripu sound ah romba miss panunen  ::)
Manasa : alakatha  :-\

Nivin : Un mela sathyama di
Manasa :na ckro poyi seranumne panriya  :P

Nivin : apdi lam Vitra maten di
Manasa : mmm??

Nivin : dbtave ketkatha di
Manasa : ha ha  ;D

Nivin : sari va veetku polame  :D
Manasa : mm  :D

(Nanum Nivin um Kai korthukitte en scooty Nina edathukitta ponom Nivin frnd um watch man um engalaye parthanga )

Watch man : thambi Ena pa ipdi adichuta pavam andha ponnu
Nivin : hyo apdilam thapa nenaikathinga na ithu lam evlo nalum ninu samalikum ithu ku poyi pavam pakra neenga than pavam

Manasa : Anna Unga job ku edhuna prachana aachu na solunga na ungalku vela vangi tharen .
Nivin :patheengala ithu epdi nu ipo ungalke therunjirkum

Nivin's frnd : Ena manasa vazhakam pola mayakaariya Mari en machana kavuthitiya ??
Manasa : Yen da lovers kula aayram irukum adhelam ninu vedika pathunu nikura eruma mathiri. valarndha matum pathathu konjam manners um venum

He : adinguuu gudugudupakaari mathiri Nadu rathirila vanthu Kathi ooraye ezhupi vittutu ithula manners pathi ne pesra
Manasa : na unaya kupten Ivana thane kupten una yaruna munala vanthu Natama Pana sonagala

Nivin : dei avakitta pesna ne than da asinga paduva vaaya kudukatha avalta
He : apro Machi konjam muna edho alaral sathama ketuchu

Nivin : naai kadichurchu da
He : kanathulaya Machi

Nivin : epdi Machi
He : naai Peru manasa thane Machi

Manasa : dei mariyathya odiru
He: rathiri nerathula kuda ivlo lipstick thevaya di unaku

Nivin : dei nanga Sanda than da potom ne Nenaikura mathiri edhum ila da
He : ipo lam lovers katti puduchu Sanda Poda start pantangala da

Manasa : nanga epdi venumnalum Sanda poduvom unaku enna da
He : dei nivinu iva La ne aranjathula thape ila da paru nadu road La ninu epdi sandaiku vara

Nivin : ha ha
He : yei manasa pisase olunga Ivana kalyanam paniko ckro Ilana Un veetuku pakathulaye edhuna room parthu kuduthuru inoru vaati indha mathiri Kathi elar thookathayum kedutha apro magalir police La compliant kuduthurven

Manasa : Elam engaluku theriyum ne moodtu poyi thoongu da mdvi .
He : dei ckro poyi itha ava veetla tholachutu vada

Manasa : aranjirven da odiru
Nivin : yei vadi Mani aachu key ah kudu

( en scooty ah avan ottitu vara na avan pinala ukanthutu vanthen )

Nivin : inime ipdi lam kiruku mathiri panatha manu andha tymla room ku veliya Un voice ketkavum evlo pathariten theriyuma
Manasa : evlo than miss panrathu una ithu ku mela poruma ila nu than kelambiten .

Nivin : adhuku nu neram Kalam ilaya paru evlo gaaliya kedaku road uh edhuna aagirndha Ena aagirkum .
Manasa : Ena aagirkum un name oda first letter Vera endha ponnuko initial ah maridukum avlo than

Nivin : olaratha di na than una suthi suthi vanthu love panunen unaku en mela love vara munadiye enaku Un mela avlo love apdi irukum pothu una vitruvena ne ilanratha nenachu feel panamaya irundhurpen elarkum iruka mathiri enakum oru China ego adhu than
Manasa : Yen da feel pani evlo venumnalum kasta patuka mudiyuthu aana onukum udhavatha andha ego ah thandi vandhu unala en kuda sernthu sandhosama iruka Mudiyatha suthi suthi vanthu love propose Pani nanga othukra vara engala vidama thorathi accept Pana veikura vara Unga kula iruka andha ego guest appearance ku kuda ready ah iladha ego Yen nanga OK sonathuku apro edhuna China prob vandha kuda adha sari Pana konjam kuda vidama ungalku munala vanthu heroism katrathuku matum ready ah iruku Unga ego

Nivin : epo andha tym La una anga partheno apove enakulla irundha ela egovum suthama poiduchu theriyuma ne enakaga indha alavuku risk edhukurana unaku na evlo mukiyam nu puriya veikura ipo matum ila ithu ku munavum ovaru tym um namakula prob create aagurapavum but nanthan adha lam serious ah eduthukama poiten Yen manu Unaku en kitta ego eh ilaya
Manasa : na ego parthurndha ineram Nama lovers ahve irundhurka mudiyathu da loos

Nivin : adipavi
Manasa : lov u  :P

(avan mela sanji avana hug panite sonen )

Manasa : nivin ethana naal drm theriyuma ipdi yarum iladha road La nyt ride Un kuda suthanum nu .
Nivin : adhan inaiku nadanthurche

Manasa : ama da
Nivin : sari di erangiko Un veedu vanthurchu

Manasa : mm

(na avana vitu piriya manase Ilama vandila irundhu erangunen enaku poga pidikala nu avanukum purinchuthu)

Manasa :
Nivin :

(rendu perum eye to eye parthukitom Nivin en kaiya puduchu avan kitaka izhuthan Nanum avan kita ottikitte avan mela sanja mathiri nu ninen avan face ah partha mathiri )

Nivin : Manu

(avan rendu kaiyayum puduchu avan kaikula vechikitan )

Manasa : mm
Nivin : sorry di romba vegama adichuten La valikutha

Manasa : ama aana Neeyum Nanum pesama irundha ithana naal La na feel Pana pain ah Vida ithu perusa valikala da
Nivin : sry sry sry very sry di

(avan Ena hug panikitu en shoulder La moonja hide panikite sonan )

Manasa : missed u a lot ra
Nivin :Nanum than

Manasa :en kudave venum ne enaku ckro Un veetla pesi Ena Mrge pani Ena kotitu poidu ithana yr thaniyave irunthuten enaku urava nee yum Un fmly um irukanum inimeyachum
Nivin : apo join fmly OK ah

Manasa : Pina sir ku Thaniya pora idea vera iruka
Nivin : apo thane Un kudave iruka mudiyum Ovvaru sec um

Manasa : epovume romance Pana thane idea panra fraud eh.
Nivin : he he

Manasa : Unga Amma ku Ena pudikum La .
Nivin : Unga ammava after Mrge avanga unakum Ammava than irupanga Manu ma

Manasa : I lov to d core nivi
Nivin : achacho na epdi veetuku poven

Manasa : nadikatha romba .
Nivin : nalaiku ofc poga unaku scooty venume

Manasa : Haan paravala mrng vanthu pick up paniko .
Nivin : adhuku edhuku di poitu pesama na ingaye thoongikren inaiku. Petrol aachum Mitcham

Manasa : engaye
Nivin : Un kudave.

Manasa : y not sure irundhuko.
Nivin : iii jolly

Manasa : but adhuku munna edhuna kovil vasala........
Nivin : Ena di kovil vasal ku po solra .

Manasa : ila da kovil vasal La irundhu oru thali vanginu Va nu sonen
Nivin : indha nerathula epdi di kedaikum.

Manasa : apo po kelambu
Nivin : varen di nalaike thaaliyoda un ofc laye vechu katren .

Manasa : ha ha

(na avan kanathulaya light ah kiss panitu Ulla oditen room kula poitu bal cony kadhava thoranthu Etti parthen Nivin angaye than scooty La ninu mela parthu siruchutu irundhan )

Manasa :ne Yen inum Pola ?
Nivin : ne Yen veliya vandha ipo

Manasa : theriyum ne inum poiruka Mata nu
Nivin: enakum theriyum ne Ipdi vanthu Etti parpa nu

Manasa :  :-*

(na en kaila kiss pani avanuku pora mathiri oothi viten flying kiss  :-* avanum avan kanatha na parka vita direction La Kati adha vangitan )