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Mufliha

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« Reply #15 on: December 31, 2014, 07:38:47 PM »
Thank u so much dr & same to u

Maashpriya

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~ яα∂нαιуιи тнєу∂αℓ ~
« Reply #16 on: January 01, 2015, 11:48:07 AM »
Ellorukum aangila putthandu nal vazhthukkal.

today yen story update pannala  pa?

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« Reply #17 on: January 01, 2015, 12:54:39 PM »
Hi Maashpriya  :) :)

Thanks and wish u the same  :) :)

Ongoing story so update vanthonae poduren Maashpriya :) :)

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« Reply #18 on: January 01, 2015, 02:22:32 PM »
Episode 8



Ashwin Narration

Ava left side pova na right sight thiruppunen. Rendu perum mutra mathiri ninnom.

Ashwinnn...

Ahh..
lorry da...

Riya kathunadhume na bike ah move paniten. Just miss.. Jothi en shirt ah tight ah pudichi irundha.. Pinadi thirumbi pardhen. Konjam crowd.

Achh:hey erangu..
Jothi:adhan onnum ila la.. Yen veen prblm namaku va polam..

Achh:chi erangu..

Ennachi nu therilaye nu pada pada nu irundhuchi.. Na andha kuttadhula riya va thedunen. Riya dupatta bike la irundhuchi.. Riya thali vizhundhu kadandha..

Achh:hey hey..endhiri de..
Jothi:hey vandhutu ashwin.. Namaku yen veen prblm.. Police case ayidum.

Ava nethila blood vandhuchi.. Ava pink dress elam red ah maridu irundhuchi.

Achh:yarachum thanni thangalaen..
Jothi:unaku yen indha vetti vela..

Ava en kaiya pudichi iludha.. (palaar nu viten)

Achh:vaaya moodu fst. Ne auto va pudichi veetuku po..
Jothi:illa nanum iruken.

Enaku ena pandradhu nu therila. Ashik call panunen.

Ashik:sollu da..
Achh:machi seekram un shop ku pakadhula ulla signal ku vaa da..

Ashik:yen da ennachi..
Achh:riya riya ku accident ayidu da.

Apo dhan pardhen. Ava kathula irundhu blood vandhutu irundhuchi.. Moochi irundhuchi..

Achh:yaravadhu auto kuptunga..  dei payama iruku da seekram vaa..

Avala second time ah en kaila vachi irundhen. Enaye ariyama azhuga vandhutu.
Yarume edhuvum kuptala.. Tc dhan vandharu.. Ambulance call panunaru.. Avaluku moochi thinara arambichidu.. Apurm konjam clg pasanga car la vandhanunga.. Avanunga dhan help panunanga.
Enaku ena pandradhu nu therila. Ashik call panunan.

Ashik:na vandhuten da.. Enga iruka.
Achh:na hos poidu iruken da.. Ne anga va..

Ashik:sari da varen.

Nanga hos ku vandhom.. Avaloda id card pardhu veetuku call panalam nu nenaichen. Bt avungakita solla payama irundhuchi..

Ashik vandhutan..

Ashik:machi yaruku da adi.. Riya ku nu sonna. Anga ullavanga edho clg ponnu nu sonanga.
Achh:kutti ila da.. Riya..party.

Ava clg id card ah kattunen. Cuz enkita vardhaiye illa..

Ashik:sari avunga veetuku infrm panitiya..
Achh:illa da payama iruku. Avunga amma matum dhan. Adhan.

Ashik:yei edhavadhu onnuna family sign kepanga da..
Achh:edhavadhuna..

Ashik:onnum agadhu da.. Formality ku sonen. Ne call panu..

Na call panunen.

Me:hello na ashwin, riya amma irukangala..
R.mom:na dhan pa pesuren.

Me:aunty konjam cmc hos ku vangalen.
R.mom:yen pa ennachi.

Me:riya bike la irundhu skit ayita.. Adhan.. Vera onnum ila vanga..
R.mom:ena soldra pa..tho varen.

Ashik:iva ena inga nikkura..
Achh:pinadi dhane utgarndhu irundha.. Lorry vandhadu theriyadha..

Jothi:illa na andha side femina pardhutu irundhen.. Lst pardhen. Bt adhu stri8 ah poidum nu nenaichen.

Enaku sema kova vandhutu. Inum naalu vidalama nu kaiya ongunen.. Ashik thaduthutan.

Ashik:vidu da..
Achh:ava sollalana inaiku nanum neyum inga kadandhu irukanum.

Dctr:nenga yaru.. Parents vandhutangala..
Ashik:nanga frnds.. Vandhutu irukanga infrm panitom.

Dctr:seekram heavy blood loss ayiruku. Avunga blood common ah irundhalum ipodhaiku blood bank la kammi ah iruku. Emergency ku blood thevai..
Achh:ahh nanga tharom.. Engaloda um avloda match agudha parunga..

Ashik blood dhan match anuchi. Apurm car la vandha pasangala oru paiyan blood match anuchi..
Rendu perum blood kuduka ponanga..
Apo dhan avaloda face elam sutham panidu irundhanga..

Jothi:ashwin..
Achh:ena..

Jothi:hmm hum onnum illa..

Enaku kastama irundhuchi.. Sanju ku call panunen.

Sanju:sollu da.. Jothi ah eragi vitutiya..
Achh:akka..

Sanju:ennachi da..
Achh:anaiku oru ponnu unkita pesunala.. Avaluku accident achi ka.. Enala dhan..  opp la cross aanom Andha neram lorry vandhutu.. Ava kathunadhula na move paniten. Avaluku adipattu2.

Sanju:ippo epdi iruka da.
Achh:akka therila pls.. Neyum inga va akka.. Enaku payama iruku.

Jothi:ashwin.. Police..
Sanju:sari varen da..

Achh:hmm.. (andha tc um inoru police um vandharu)
Tc:thambi anga irundha fz tn 01 7823 ungalodaya..

Achh:ama sir..
Tc:andha scooty la vandha ponnu.

Achh:therinja ponnu dhan sir.

Apo riya oda amma vandhanga..

R.mom:ennachi pa.. Riya ku enachi..
Achh:adhu onum agala aunty.. Payapadathinga..

Police:thambi konjam thaniya va pa..
Achh:ena sir. (ena solla poraro nu payama irundhuchi)

Police: lorry driver mela dhan mistk. Drinks panitu wrng route la vandhan. Nanga pudichitom. Oru case eludhi thandhutunga. Yenna nenga dhan spot la irundhadu andha ponna kuttidu vandhadu.
Achh:hmm sari sir..

Police poitaru. Riya amma aludhanga.. Vegama..

Achh:ennachi aunty..
R.mom:lorry la ya adipattuchi..

Achh:yar sonna..
Jothi:sorry ashwin na dhan

Achh:ne ena lusa.. Chi en kannu munadiye nikkadha..

Akka um vandhuta..

Sanju:achh ennachi da ipo epdi iruka..
Achh:inum onum therila akka.. Ashik um inoru paiyan um blood kuduka poi irukanga.

Akka angaye enaku ara vita..

Sanju:andha ponnu ku unala evlo kastam da naya..
R.mom:aiyo yen adikuringa..

Achh: sanju idhu riya oda amma..
Sanju:ivana mannichidunga ma.. Ivanala dhan elame.. Ne enemy nu solluva. Ava dhan una kapathi iruka da.

Achh:akka..
R.mom:aiyo nenga ena thambi ah soldringa.

Nurse:keep silent.
Sanju:avanala dhan ava apdi paduthu iruka..

R.mom:illanga.. Thambi nala ila..lorry driver dhan vitan.. Apurm thambi dhan en ponna rendu time kapathinuchi.. Ipo um thambi than..

Akka enna pardha.. Kovama irundha.. Idhuvaraikum ava ena adichadu ila.. So avalum aludhuta.. Apo dhan enmela thappu ila nu therinjikita.

Sanju:sorry da..
Dctr:operatn pana 4lakhs udane venum.. Thalai la adi pattu iruku.. Seekram indha acount ku money transfer panidunga. Apurm idhula sign podunga..

R.mom:4lakhs ah  ipo udane avlo panadhu enga poven.
Dctr:critical situation la irukanga ma.. Pls..seekram..

Avar poitaru.. Cha manasatchi iladhavana irukane..

R.mom: ipo avlo panadhuku na enga poven.. Ashwin thambi enkoda konjam variya pa..
Achh:sari aunty..

Avunga oru address sonanga anga ponom.. Yaro oru ponnu velila nina.. Engala pardhadum ulla poita.

Achh:yaru veetu aunty..
R.mom:riya appa oda inoru veetu..

Achh:inga yen vandhom aunty.
R.mom:avarala matum dhan pa ipo help pana mudiyum.

Nanga ponom. Oru uncle vandharu.. Avar riya dad.

R.dad:anu, ne enga inga..
R.mom:enaku thayavu seinchi.. 4lakhs tha.. En ponnu ipo uyiruku poratidu iruka.. Pls..

R.dad:anu, riya nama ponnu. Enkita kenjura.. Ana Enkita ipo panam illa..

Pardha sema panakaravanga madhiri irundhuchi. Panam ila nu soldraru..

Yarunga..
Ohh vanga vanga.. Perusa sabam vitavanga elam inga vandhu ninkuranga..

R.dad:meena, summa iru. En ponnu ku accident ayidu..
R.sithi:apo inga irukuradhu yaru.. Ena fst wife pardhadum manasu alaipayudho..

R.mom:pls meena.. Unkita kenji kekuren..panam kudu.. En ponnu uyir ku poratidu iruka..
R.sithi:sari panam tharen.. Ana un ponnu perula ulla andha veeta en ponnuku eludhi kudu..

Oru uyir poidu iruku inga enana adhuku vila pesidu irukanga.. Kadupayidu..

R.mom:sari tharen.. Ipo panam kudu..
Achh:hello aunty.. Nenga lusa.. Ivungakita irundhu panam vangi riya uyir polaicha nu avaluku therinjidu ava adutha nimishame sethuduva.. Nenga vanga na panadhuku erpatu pandren.

R.sithi:idhu yaru.. Aunty nu soldran.. Un ponnuku set pani irukiya..
Achh:chi vaaya moodu.. Aunty vanga nenga..

(riya dad vaaya thorakala.. Ivar elam oru manishan)

R.mom:epdi pa mudiyum.. Avakita solla venam pa..
Achh:nenga vanga fst..

Na avungala alaichidu vandhuten.. Ena panalam.. Apo dhan project seiya.. Bank la 15lakhs iruku..

Deepi ku call panunen..
No response.

Jezzy ku call panunen.
Busy la irundhuchi..

Aiyo yarkita ipo pesidu iruka..
Jezzy atten panu.. Cut ayidu..

R.mom:ennachi pa..

Jezzy kita irundhu call vandhuchi..

Jezzy:ena ma dhidir nu call panuna..
Achh:yei ena de oruthi ena ena ph aten pana matra.. Unaku ena busy nu varudhu apdi ena de vetti kilikuringa.

Jezzy:hey ennachi ma. relax.
Achh:sari bank la irundhu na soldra account ku 4lakhs transfer panu..

Jezzy:ena ma.. Edho poto sent pandra madhiri kekura.
Achh:jezzy cmdy pandra neram ila.. Oru operation kaga.. Hos account ku dhan money transfer pananum seekram..

Jezzy:sari pandren ma. Ne account details sent panu.

Na sent pani viten.

Jezzy:na pani vitren. Yaruku ennachi.. Endha hos..
Achh:thanks de.. Frnd.. Cmc la iruka.. Ashik um anga dhan avaluku blood kuduthutu irundhan.

Jezzy:sari nanum varen.
Achh:money..

Jezzy:adhu epovo transfer ayidu.. Online money transfer paniten.
Achh:thank yu so much  sari na vaikuren.

Jezzy:hmm ok ma..
Achh:aunty don't worry. Money transfer paniyachi. Inime avaluku onnum agadhu.

R.mom:enaku ena soldradhune therila pa..
Achh:vidunga.. Vanga polam.

Mobile pardhen. Ashik kita irundhu 3 mis calls..

Call panunen..

Ashik:enga iruka machi..
Achh:tho anga dhn varom da. Jezzy anga varenu sonna da.

Ashik:ok ok da..nenga pardhu vanga.

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In hospital

Riya ku opratn nadandhutu iruku.

Ashik:akka, nenga jothi elam veetuku ponga. Nanga pardhukurom.

(apo edhavadhu dnt call me jothi call me joe nu sollatum munji la kuthalam nu nenaichen. Ava pardhute nina)

Sanju:illa paravala pa.. Nanum iruken.
Ashik:ila akka kuttam ah iruka venam. Edhavadhu onnuna Infrm pandren. Nenga ponga..

Jezzy apo dhan vandha.

Ashik:jezzy koda vandhuta akka. Nenga pardhu poidu vanga. Nanga pardhukurom.
Sanju:sari pa..

Avunga kilambitanga. Andha clg pasangalum..

Jezzy:yaruku ennachi..
Ashik:ashwin frnd de..

Jezzy:ok ok.. Apurm ena na off ac la irundhu 4lakhs money transfer pana sonnan. Unaku infrm panuna..
Ashik:hmm irukatum.. Andha ponnu ilana ipo ashwin ila.. Oru vela indha madhiri nalladhukaga dhan andha money irundhu iruku pola.. Money epo venavum varum pogum jezzy ma.. Pardhukalam.

Jezzy:sari sari..

Konja neradhula ashwin riya mom vandhutanga..

Ashik:vandhutan..
Achh:machi unkita onnu sollanum da..

Ashik:ena da money dhane..
Achh:ama da..

Ashik:jezzy sollita.. No prblm.. Pardhukalam..
Achh: thanks da.. Bt adhula ungaloda work um iruku.. Nama endha personal use kum eduthadu ila la..

Ashik: oru vela adhu idhuka irukalam vidu..
Achh:thanks da..

Avaluku operation nadandhutu irundhuchi...
Dctr vandharu..

Ashik:enachi dr..
Dctr:operatn nalla padiya mudinjichidu..

All:    :)
Dctr:bt avunga kila vilundhadula.. Kadhu adhir vu dhan pathika pattu iruku. Konja naal complete bed rest la irukanum. Apurm dhan avunga ear check pananum. Romba sound ah pesa kodathu.. Avungaluku sari agura varaikum..

All:ok dctr 

Dctr ponaru..

Ashik: ena oru dialog ah vitaru pola jezzy
Dctr: crct na neradhula kuttidu vandhinga.. Ilana engala onnum pani iruka mudiyadhu.

R.mom: thanks dctr..
Dctr:idhu enga kadamai..

Ashik:(4 lakhs ah vaai la potu2 kapathalana.. Una inaiku potu thali irupen da sotta manda)

Romba neram vidave ila..

Ashwin narration

Ava ena kuptadhu matum inum enakula ketute iruku.. Na thirumbi parkuradhukula idha elam nadandhuchi.. Oru vela na avala meet panama irundhu irundha idhu elam nadandhu irukadhu.. Enmela ava sanji irundha.. Apo enaye ariyama azha arambichen. Andha ovoru nimisham um enaku naraga vedathaiya irundhuchi.. Avala kapathiduvena nu enaku theriama thavichen..

Anbaiyum aravanaipaiyum edhir pardha enaku.. Alugaiyum vedanaiyum thandhaiyadi.. Irutu pona un padhaigalai pagalakuren.. Enidam vandhu serndhu kolladi penne..
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Episode 9



Ashwin Narration

Romba neram ah vidave illa.

Nurse:yaravadhu oruthavanga venumna ponga. Ana avungakita pesathinga..
Ashik:nenga poi parunga ma..

R.mom:illa pa.. Avala apdi parka enaku thairiyam illa
Achh:nanum avunga koda polama nurse.

Nurse: illa sir. Dctr vandha thittuvaru.
Achh:illa avunga emotional ayida kodadhu dhan.

Nurse:sari sari poidu dctr check up ku varadhuku munadi vandhutunga..
Achh:thanks.. Vanga aunty..

Rendu perum avala parka ponom. Avala pardhadume enoda idhayam udaiyura madhiri valika arambichidu.  Avaloda kaila kaal la.. Thalai la kattu potu irundhuchi..

R.mom:nalla odi aadi thiru thiru nu iruka ipo ipdi inga kadakurale..  ivalukaga dhane na iruken. Idha parkava..
Achh:aalathinga aunty. Avaluku onnum agadhu. Nenga aludha dhan avaluku edhavadhu agum.

R.mom:ila pa.. Na azhala.. Avaluku edhuvum agadhu..

Ava endha oru salanam um ilama paduthu irundha.. Epo di ne endhiripa.. Ne paduthu iruka ovvoru sec um na uyiroda koda eriyuren. Seekram endhirichi enkita sanda podu di.. Enala mudinja varaikum aunty ah cmprmise panunen. Ipo avalukaga na idhan pana mudiyum.

Nurse check pananum nu vandhanga.. Nanga vandhutom.

R.mom:na epdi ungaluku thanks soldradhu nu therila. Nenga elam veetuku ponga pa. Time achi. Veedula theda poranga..
Achh:illa aunty nanga irukom..

R.mom:illa pa.. Na pardhukuren.
Ashik:ila ma, ipdi ungala thaniya elam vida mudiyadhu..

R.mom:venam pa. Na pardhukuren.
Achh:thaniya elam venam. Nengale pathatama irukinga. Nanga yaravadhu irukom.

Jezzy: apo nenga rendu perum kilambunga. Na avunga koda iruken.
Achh:yeh ne epdi irupa.. Na iruken. Nenga rendu perum kilambunga.

Ashik:illa jezzy ye irukatum. Avaluku hostl pakkam dhane.
Achh:pakkam dhan.. Ava warden kathuvale..

Jezzy:nenga rendu perum kathama ponga. Na pardhukuren.
R.mom:aiyo ne yen ma.. Unaku kastam.. Na pardhukuren.

Jezzy: unga ponnu ilana enga achh nanga pardhu irukave mudiyadhu.. Unga kastadha share panika dhan nanga irukom. Nenga ungala thaniya nenaichikadhinga ma.
R.mom:indha chinna vayasulaye ivlo poruppa irukinga..

All:   :) :)
R.mom:sari pa.. Inime na sonna keka poringala..

Ashik&achh:sari ma..
Achh:machi apdiye station la bike eduthutu polam da..

Ashik:sari da.. Jezzy inga vayen..
Jezzy:sollu ma..

Ashik:hostl la kavunthadichi thungura madhiri thungama olunga nyt mulichi iru..
Jezzy:  adhu elam na pardhupen. Rendu perum kilambunga.

Achh:chlm.. Ne olunga pardhukita unaku mrg varum bodhu lollypop vangidu varen de.. 
Jezzy:(ivan ena idhuku ipdi kila erangitan.. ) unga approach enaku approach enaku pudichi iruku. Kilambunga.. _/\_

Ashik:kilambunga kilambungana.. Indha paisa.. Neyum amma um nyt saptunga.. Apurm.. Edhavadhu medicine ku money venum la.. Idha vachiko..
Achh:yei ama da.. Nanum marandhuten..
(purse pardhen verum 500 matum dhan irundhuchi.) dei kaila money ila da..

Jezzy:lusungala.. Na varum bodhe money eduthu vandhuten. Iruku. Rendu perum kavala padama poidu mrg seekram vanga.
Achh:sari sari..

Nanum ashik um kilambi vandhom..

**********

Police station

Achh:dei idhan da fst time police station kula varen.. Payama iruku da.
Ashik:enamo na matum daily vandhutu pora madhiri pesura, vaaya mooditu va da..

Inspector:ena pa ena case..
Ashik:bike sir..

Inspector:bike kanama pocha.. Idhe polappu.. Kudichidu bike ah engavadhu nippata vendiyadhu apurm kanum nu soldradha..
Ashik:(sema kadupachi)sir, mrg signal kita accident anuchi la. Apo bike vitu2 ponom. Andha bike..

Inspector:ohh ohh andha bike ah.. Yov yettu, andha fz bike key ah eduthutu vandhu thambingakita kudu..

Key kudutharu

Achh:thanks sir..
Ashik:(romba mukiyam) varom sir.. fst bike la tier engine la irukanu check paniko machi.. 

Bike eduthukitom..

Ashik:na shop ku poren.. Ne pardhu po da..
Achh:sari machi..

**************

In home

Na veetukula entry anaen.

K.Riya:iyeee mama vandhachi..
Achh:chlmm

Mom:nillu da..
Sanju:amma summa irunga.

Achh:ennachi akka.. Enna ma.
Mom:unaku edhu da ivlo thairiyam..

Achh:ennachi ma.. Ena pesuringa..
K.Riya:jothi athai aludhanga. Baki apola irundhu kovama iruku..

Achh:ohh..
Mom:epdi da jothi ah kita kai neetuna..

Achh:maa.. Avaluku support panadhinga erichal agudhu. Romba selfish ava..
Mom:nakka aruthuduven da.. Avakita sorry kelu.. Ava ooruku porenu aludhu iruka..

Achh:potume.. Avaluke theriyum na anga epdi patta situation la irundhenu..

(edhir parkave ila amma arainjitanga)

Sanju:maaa..
Achh:  :(

K.Riya: mama   :'(
Mom:po avakita sorry sollu.. Amma va mathikirina..

Achh:hmm..
Mom:jothi inga va ma..

Ava vandha.. Avala parka konjam kadupa irundhalum. Pavam ah irundhuchi..

Achh:sorry.. (na mela vandhen.)

************

Enaku ava adipattu hos thukidu pona nyabagame irundhuchi.. Avala pardhula irundhu en manasu enkita ila..

Oru murai un parvaiyai enmel vizha seiyadi penne..
Yugam muzhum kathu kidapen en sevaiyai seiya.

K.Riya:mama..
En thalaiya eduthu ava madila vachikita..
Achh:  :)

K.Riya:valikudha mama
Achh:ama da..  (riya oda vali enaku iruku)

K.Riya:natz vandhadum.. Baki ah mati vitralam.. azhadha mama (ava kutti kaiyala thodachi vita..)
Achh:hahaha.. Illa da.. Sari schl la ena padicha..

K.Riya: today maths miss addition subtraction solli thandhanga.. Na fulla crct mama..
Achh:chamathu kutti de ne..

K.Riya: mama madhiri..

Sanju vandha..

Sanju:ena da pandra..
K.Riya:po mummy pesadha baki mama va adikum podhu ne yen baki ah adikala..

Sanju:chumma iru de vaayadi. Sollu da kovama..
Achh:illa akka.. Enaku adhu elam valikala.. Avala nenaicha dhan kastama iruku.

Sanju:onnum agadhu da. Feel panadha..
Achh:ava ilana na illa akka inaiku. 

Sanju:dei apdi pesadha da.. Unaku onnum agadhu..

Amma vandhanga..

Mom:achh kanna..
K.Riya:po baki mama unkoda dooka..

Mom:enkoda dooka va  sari poren..
Achh:vanga ma.. Patti pavam.. Inoru naal adicha apo dooka sollitalam darlin..

K.Riya:ok ok mama kaga.. Ulla vanga. Inime mama va adichinga.. Konnu konnu..
Mom:thallu di.. Amma ena avunga madila paduka vachikitanga.. Kannadha methuva thadavi kuduthanga.. Sorry da amma va manichidu..

Achh:mmm..
K.Riya:hm, hum no mama.. Natz vandhadum na mati viduven.. Ilana kneel down poda sollu..

Achh:patti dhan sorry solitangala,.
K.Riya:po mama.. Ne amma paiyan. En pecha kekave matra   

Mom:adi kaludha.. Unaku enadi avlo.. Kila odu..
K.Riya:arjun ku fever..  Na poi avana parka poren..

Ava kila poita..

Mom:ipo andha ponnu epdi iruku da..
Achh:operatn mudinji iruku ma. Kadhula irundhu blood vera vandhu iruku. So konjam critical dhan bt crct ah ponadhu nala paravala.. Ava kannu mulicha dhan theriyum..  pavam avunga amma. Thaniya dhan pardhukuranga. Jezzy dhan vitu2 vandhu irukom ma.

Mom:onnum agadhu da.. Nalla ayiduva.. Ne edhayum nenaikadha, nalaiku appa um nanum vandhu parkurom da.
Achh:kandipa ma.. Thanks.

Mom:ena da ammakita elam thanks, sari va sapadu ottivitren. En pulaya vera adichiten.
Achh:adicha otti viduvingana daily adi vangalam pola.. 

Sanju:aiyo unga pasa mazhai nipatunga.. Sapta vanga. Kila jothi matum dhan iruka na poren.
Achh:neyum arainjala.. Enaku ottividu..

Sanju:en ponne kaiyala saptra unaku ena da..
Achh:psss pss ka..

Sanju:vandhu thola da..

Na saptu2 appa kita pesidu mela vandhen. Time 11.00 ayidu.. Ineram oruthi pathi thukadhula irupale.. Call potu kalachi vitra vendiyadhu dhan..

Ring ponuchi..

Jezzy:sollunga sir..
Achh:ena de ivlo theliva pesura..

Jezzy:un brand kadaikala machi adhan..
Achh:oh jesus indha pen than pesuvadhu inadhu endru ariyamal pesikural.. Ivalai manniyum..

Jezzy:mannichachi.. Matr sollu..
Achh:saptiya de..

Jezzy:(ena ivlo pasama kekuran) bed la iruka ponnu unaku romba vendiya ponno machi..
Achh:eeeeee paaaah epdi de..

Jezzy:hmm 11 maniku call pani saptiya nu ivlo pasama kekuriye..
Achh:hehehe elam oru pasam dhan..

Jezzy:  :o
Achh: enade sound kanum..

Jezzy:nanum sapten. Amma um saptanga. Fst venam nu sonnanga apurm cmpl pani canteen ku kuttidu ponen. Avunga orae alugai ma.. Ivlo neram pesidu irundhanga.. Ipo dhan konjam munadi thungunanga.
Achh: (ava sonnadhuku apurm dhan nimathiya irundhuchi) apurm ava.. Ava epdi iruka.. Kannu mulichala..

Jezzy:illa.. Bt seekram endhirichiduva.. Ne poi thungu. Mrg konjam seekram va da.. Na hostl ku vera ponum warden ku theriyama.
Achh:jezzy vazhiye thani vazhi ache.. Compound eri kuthichi odidu..  :P

Jezzy:ading.. Ipdi elam public la avamana padutha kodathu.. Ne ph ah vai.. Ahh thukam varudhe..
Achh:lolly pop de..

Jezzy:  :D sari thungu good nyt..

Jezzy ph vachita.. En nyabagam elam riya mela dhan irundhuchi..

Andha iravu kadikara mullin oliyai rasithen oru vidiyalukaga.. Thukam indri thavikindren.. Aanal ne inum thuyil kollavillai..  :(

Nyt fulla thungala.. Apurm thungiten. Sudden ah kanna thorakum podhu.. Tym pardhen. Achacho tym ache nu.. Endhirichi ready agi hos ku ponen..

Anga pardha chair la ye jezzy thungidu irundha..

Achh:yei endhiri de.. Jezzy..
Jezzy:yaru.. Maa..peii..  :o

Achh:yei lusu ashwin de..
Jezzy:  :o 4:30 mani dhane agudhu da..

Achh:4:30 yaaa  :o :D na apo time parkum podhu 6.30 achi.. Watch pardhen. 4.30 dhan irundhuchi.. 3.30 ah 6:15 nu nenaichi vandhuten de..  :P
Jezzy: nenaipa da nenaipa.aditya roy kapur koda lita..

Achh:  :o
Jezzy: Pesidu irundhen nu solla vandhen da. Ketuthitiye da paavi.. Adi adi...  :P kanna moodina varuvana.. ::)

Achh: thunguriya ma..
Jezzy:  :)

Achh: Jezzy..

(kadhula kai vachidu thunguna)

Na riya room ku ponen. Avaluku glucose eritu irundhuchi.. Na vandhuten. Apo ava thungidu dhan irundha.. Konjam water eduthu face la thelichidu thalli ninukiten.

Achh:endhiri anjali endhiri  :P
Jezzy:dei adhu en da na thunguna matum ungaluku porukave matudhu..

Achh:eeeeeee  :D
Jezzy:aala vidu da sami.. Ne dhan vandhutala.. Ne pardhuko.. Na poren..

Achh:hahaha
Jezzy:ipdi sirikadha da.. Nayi nari elam namma inam dhan vandhutu nu hos kula padai eduthuta podhu..

Achh: po de po de..
Jezzy:sari na kilamburen. Eve varen.

Achh:  ;)

Ava kilambi poita..
Ena panalam.. Ahh.. Ashik call panunen..

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Achh:hello machi..
Ashik:ena da..

Achh:thunguriya machi..
Ashik:illa da thuni thovaikura.. Indha time la call pani thunguriya nu kekura. Ne thungala..

Achh:na hos la iruken..
Ashik:  :o ivlo seekram unaku endhirikura palakkame ilaye da.. Sari pardhuko.. Na thunguren.

Achh:dei konjam porupoda nadanthuka da.. Endhiri endhiri..
Ashik:nyt shop clse pana late ayidu da..konja neram viten.

Achh:maten.. Ne va.. Illana veetuku call panuven..
Ashik:vandhu tholayuren da naya.. Vachi tholla.. En darlin endhirichita pora..

Achh:ohh ohh  :P

Vachiten..

Epdiyo oruthavana thunga vidama paniyachi.. Ama indha deepi ena panuva..  :D call panunen. Switch off  :o ushaaar ah iruka..

Aunty endhirichitanga..

Aunty:ne epo pa vandha..
Achh:ipo dhan vandhen aunty.

Aunty:andha ponnu..
Achh:hostl poita..

Aunty:unaku en pa siramam...
Achh:apdi elam ila aunty..

Dctr check pana vandhanga..

Achh:ipo epdi iruku dctr.
Dctr: uyir ku endha prblm um ila,. Bt avunga cure ah aga konjam late agum.. Inum 3 hrs la kan mulichiduvanga..

Achh&Aunty:  :o

Happy irundhuchi..
3hrs epo agum nu wait panunen.. Andha 3hrs um 3yrs madhiri irundhuchi..

Andha thavippu koda azhaga irundhuchi.. Enakula vandha sandhosam idhu varaikum en life la kadaikadhadu.. Andha 3hrs la.. Ava endhiricha epdi pesanum.. Enna pananum.. Ava ena pardha kova paduvala. Siripala. Ava sogathula enayum serdhupala nu thoughts odunichi..

Aunty:riyaa.. Riyaa endhirichitiya da..  :)
Achh: endhirichitala.. Riya..

Ava avunga amma kaiya pudichi irundha.. Kannale sirichi avaluku onnum ila nu sonna.. Apo enna pardha.. Nanum pardhen..

Parvai veesi kollum penne.. Oru vardhai pesi en uyir pizhaika seivai kanne.. ♥

Maashpriya

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« Reply #20 on: January 03, 2015, 05:15:00 PM »
I love it. Very emotional scene ya. Nalaikaga ippave wait pandren.

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« Reply #21 on: January 03, 2015, 05:29:14 PM »
Hi Maashpriya :)

Wow semaya ensoi panuringa pola wid this story  :) :)

Very hppy seeing ur feedback  Maashpriya  :)

Maashpriya

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« Reply #22 on: January 04, 2015, 04:23:51 PM »
Story Update kum leave ah today?

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« Reply #23 on: January 04, 2015, 04:29:02 PM »
Hi Maashpriya  :) :)

Iniki day mudiya kude ile  :) :)

Athukula ivlo avasaram  :) :)

Parpom story update vantha , story here vum poda padum  :) :)

Maashpriya

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« Reply #24 on: January 04, 2015, 10:38:59 PM »
Today radhaiyin thedaluku leave.

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« Reply #25 on: January 04, 2015, 11:11:43 PM »
Hi Maashpriya  :)

Just now storywriter leave this msg :

I can't post my story ‪‎Radhaiyin_Theydal‬ for a week. Cuz of my practical ll start.. Pls forgive me .. Sorry ..

Maashpriya

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« Reply #26 on: January 05, 2015, 10:57:52 AM »
So sad
its ok

and all the best

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« Reply #27 on: January 05, 2015, 11:07:43 AM »
Hi Maashpriya  :)

Thanks for ur wishes & will convey it  :) :)

At least inform pani irkanga so we knoe how long story irkatha nu  :)

Maashpriya

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« Reply #28 on: January 05, 2015, 11:17:55 AM »
Ama munnadiye sonnadhu nalladha pochu. Ana story writer name enna?

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« Reply #29 on: January 05, 2015, 12:12:35 PM »
Hi Maashpriya  :) :)

Jezzy avanga name  :)

The same storywriter for 'Konjam Mothal Konjam Kathal' story. :)